Had a bit of an issue with making a logo due to not knowing how transparency works. (Got that to work after a couple hours ._.)
Now this took me more time to make than the renders ;-; (I know…)
Mainly I’d like feedback on this as I feel as if I’m doing something wrong. Maybe it’s the whole angle or the lighting? personally I think it’s ok but I think it could be better!
The renders are good, and are impressive for an artist who started recently.
For the logo, it all seems a little bit dull excluding the lightsaber. I’m no Star Wars fanatic so if it’s meant to be a dull, dark theme, feel free to ignore that lol. Otherwise, potentially add a blue-ish glow around the logo (potentially using a motion or Gaussian blur). Also, the avatar’s hair seems to be offset a bit, might want to fix that.
Instead of the characters looking directly towards the audience, A good idea would be to have them facing each other like a battle scene… Overall they’re pretty good to be just starting off, Nice rendering and the black background helps make the sabers pop more.
Awesome, keep up the great work! The black background really fits well, making the colors pop out more. Maybe just add a bit more lighting so the character isn’t as dark.
Thanks for the suggestion. I was originally going to add a background but I’m not too good with PBR yet and I haven’t tried making grass so I figured this would do for the time being!
This is very good for someone who is new to GFX(I don’t make GFX tho)! I feel like the lighting could be improved for the pictures, especially the second one because the face is kinda blending in with the shadows so you may wanna work on that.
Ahh well the 2nd one was mainly based around shadows half covering the character to make the lightsabers more immersive but I get what you mean. As for the lighting I would do it in a light setting but I don’t feel like I’m prepared for a full on lighting scene outside. Thanks for the feedback!
