Feedback on my GFX

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#1

Hello all, I made this GFX.

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I am still a beginner, but I have taken some of the advice from this post:

Applications Used:
Blender
Roblox Studio
Paint. net
Photoshop

Something I do feel is off still.

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#2

Try to make terrain in blender and render it together.u need normal maps. I can help for that

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#3

This looks cool! ! Here are some tips:

  • Try to crop the image.
  • The person looks like it’s standing above the grass.
  • The posing looks a bit weird. The legs look unnatural.
  • The terrain is quite empty. Try to add hills, trees, flowers, etc.

I hope I helped. :slight_smile:

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#4

I don’t like the GFX, heres why:

You did not use blender, it doesn’t look so realistic.
It looks like your floating, the pose could be better.
The background does not match with the avatar.
Maybe add more details, it would be better.

What you can do next time:
Do it in blender, if you don’t know how to use it then feel free to message me.
Add more details
Make a better pose.
Try to fit everything.

Best regards, Atlathic.

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#5

What do you mean by “You did not use blender”.

#6

It is indeed. As this is part of my game, I am trying to hire a builder. (i failed using the talent hub, as im not sending any id to roblox)

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#7

It seems like you used roblox studio. blender is a better program to do graphical design (GFX).

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#8

I used blender to render the character. The terrain was a screenshot.

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#9

I rather using fully blender, photoshop for other effects.

#10

I’m actually trying to redo this with the terrain imported into blender.

Texturing is the hard part with this.

#11

Yeah, texturing is the hardest part. I mostly get a plane (floor) and give it pbr textures, and i get it a background.

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#12

Blender isn’t even loading the texture for some reason. It’s only loading the colour…

#13

Hello there. i think your GFX for a beginner is not bad. Good job on that one.Keep up the work ^^. But theres of course a lot of remaining things. first of all if you’re using blender 2.81 i would recommend you to play with the Roughness/Metalic ratio of the models. Then you could turn on screen space reflection. and of course if you’re tired of using the default HDRI. you can get one for free on a lot of websites like “HDRI Heaven”

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#14

Thank you for the feedback, I’m creating a new GFX now and I’m using all your feedback. Honestly it now looks amazing so far.

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#15

try discord HiddenDev!
there is a lot of people to hire there.

#16

I don’t use Discord, I don’t like it.

But I know someone who could build it for me.

#17

You could use Guilded, it’s similar to Discord.

#18

Generally, it looks pretty good. But on the note of artistic composition, I would consider trying to frame the character, using the rule of thirds, and add other objects to the scene.

#19

It looks good but, here are some tips you could use.

  • Better graphics, suggestion would be an HDRI possibly.
  • Make the image closer, so it doesn’t look super far.
  • Make the arm aligned with the torso, the arm is half through the toro.
  • Change posing, or fix it up a bit.
    <3 Best luck making more graphics in the future.