Feedback for my MW Fanart
I created a new work, Magical World, with people standing on floating rocks. But I feel lacking in anything, so ask for your feedback.
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Great, just need a little bit more light on the wand, or something.
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To me, it doesn’t look like the rock is floating, but other than that, it’s nice!
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Thank you for feedback, and I will fix it very well.
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This render is certainly mysterious! I particularly like the spark effect on the wand. Here are some of my suggestions as to how you could make it even better.
Suggestions
The colour of the light emitting from the wand appears to be purple, however the light reflected on the player is completly white. With a slightly purple light source, you would expect there to be a purple tint on the player. You should be able to adjust this with a tint effect in your image editing software or by changing the light colour from within the rendering software itself.
Secondly, there isn’t a lot of depth in the image. As such, around the wizard there is a lot of unused space. Perhaps you could add some glowing orbs, more floating rocks or even other wizards to make the image a bit more interesting?
On the other hand, if you’d rather have just the one wizard, it might be a good idea to place them in the centre of the image. Right now, the image’s composition is a bit off as it appears that the wizard is positioned slightly on the right-hand side of the image.
Conclusion
You’ve clearly got a talent for rendering and image editing. As mentioned earlier, I really like how you added the spark effect after the image was finished rendering. The way the light interacts with the different materials is also quite nice. I hope you find my suggestions helpful.
Looking forward to seeing what you create next!
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Welcome buddy! You surely are welcome!
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Thanks your suggestions, You have helpful make me get new idea!
I like The Wand Maybe add some like monsters in the background?
I like it, but add more detail instead of it being pure darkness.
The lighting is really neat! Maybe it could be a bit wider area of light though so the rock doesn’t appear to float?