Hello! I am a logo designer called iTzEmail. I have been doing Logos for about 1 year now and I want some feedback on them. Here is my portfolio - [CLOSED] iTzEmail | Text Logo Designer. If you have any questions message me on Dev Forum or comment on them down below!
I think it would be best if you focused on consistency and tried to redo the snow at the highest quality. Following the circles I have marked, the layered snow on the letters are very inconsistent because they don’t follow the downward slope of the typographic elements. For example, the snow does not follow the indentation down for the “N” and neither the “W” which has multiple.
For the “H,” the snow is not covering the crack which does bother me a teensy bit.
This isn’t the worst logo ever, this is actually really good; but I think it would be best if the the snow wasn’t just big blobs and were given more sharpness at the ends where the middle is the thickest.
The consumer won’t see this if it’s at a small size, but if you display this logo more bigger, these issues could arise to the vision of the viewer.