Feedback on my new Game Icon

CursedMxnkey · July 13, 2020, 4:35pm

I recently made this for me and my friends new game, any improvements or nice comments? : D

LasroxRB · July 13, 2020, 4:39pm

personally i dont like it, no colors match and the lighting feels off. I would consider making it have a color theme and giving better lighting.

Valkianz · July 13, 2020, 4:44pm

Nice art work! If your new to making GFX make sure to add a bit more lighting that matches with the background. Keep up the good work!

CursedMxnkey · July 13, 2020, 4:45pm

So does that mean the lighting should be purple, or brighter?

Valkianz · July 13, 2020, 4:46pm

I would say It fine how it is now, but like maybe add a bit of lighting behind him.

LasroxRB · July 13, 2020, 5:15pm

Also the lighting feels off because it isnt coming from anywhere, so it feels strange, and the lighting when it was rendered looks un-even.

CursedMxnkey · July 13, 2020, 5:20pm

Alrighty, thanks for the feedback. I will take it into account.

praIex · July 13, 2020, 5:32pm

It looks fine, assuming you’re a beginner, as you progress on I recommend learning and relying on tutorials to help you perfect aspects of the GFX like lighting, poses, movements, etc. But seeing as you are now, you did a good job for starters.

Non_Fish · July 13, 2020, 5:52pm

Dang that looks nice, But text feels a bit wrong.

CursedMxnkey · July 14, 2020, 6:06am

May I as how the text feels a bit wrong, so I can improve it.

FrankKitchener · July 14, 2020, 6:25am

Nice render! Personally I think you need to do more of a pose on the player model as at the minute they’re really tiny bends, so in my personal option maybe redo the render and make the pose look better

CursedMxnkey · July 14, 2020, 6:30am

Indeed, I was planning to the that right now actually!

Sharkyia · July 14, 2020, 6:32am

I really love it. In my eyes aka the person who develops 24/7 the colours really stand out! If I seen this game Icon I would immediately click on it. The name sounds amazing and I love the big bold NEW!. I like the background colour purple and the text being coloured yellow with a black border. The character / roblox player has a nice shine on the face / reflection. The movement / orientation in the hands is smooth and not clunky.

You did a overall good job!

GodpraiserNOW · July 14, 2020, 6:40am

Nice work! However, the yellow words don’t seem to go with the purple background. I would definitely change the color scheme. Also, I could see the words (not “NEW”) being in 3D.

CursedMxnkey · July 14, 2020, 6:51am

Thanks for your feedback, but the idea is for the yellow to stand out, and to not match with the purple background. I will definitely make them 3D though.