Feedback on my new third person shooter game #Devlog 4

Previous Devlogs :-
#Devlog1 Here
#Devlog2 Here
#Devlog3 Here

last Devlog i made the gears system which gives the players boosts to help them progress in the game faster and easier

in this Devlog :-

i updated the datastore system which took me a lot of time to do , the new system in faster and safer
i replaced the roblox default tools buttons with a new one i made (i really need your feedback the tool buttons and their shortcuts)
i added potions another way to get boosts but for a certain amount of time
i added levels system (for now there nothing special when you get to high levels)
i added a very basic loading screen

Changes based on your feedback from previous Devlogs :-

repositioned the ammo frame to be at the bottom right corner

Videos :-




there is a bug happened in the third video that show the gun button twice i fixed it after recording*

i decreased the quality of the videos to meet the upload requirements *

next step ? :-
now i think i made almost all main systems for the game so i will finally start working on the gameplay so expect less devlogs in the next days

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thanks for reading (2024/11/29)-(Devlog 4)

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The game looks good, genuinely looks like the sort of thing that I’d see in the popular game page. Which is meant to be a compliment by the way.

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Question though, why is there that shoot icon on the right-hand side? Is it for mobile players? If so you should remove it for other devices because it can be kinda annoying.

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yes it is for mobile player , thanks for your suggestion i appreciate it

what do think about the tools buttons ?

also i need your feedback about the shortcut keys is it easy for you to use the “0” key to un/equip the gun ? , is it easy for you to use the right mouse button to shoot ?

That looks really good! Though I believe that if you changed the mouse cursor into a crosshair it would look a lot more polished. The only other thing would probably be the camera position, because the character kinda blocks what you’re trying to shoot.
Other than that, it looks really solid! Nice work!

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The tool button looks really good but I think you should place it in the middle aswell because players might also be annoyed that it’s on the side.

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way too early to give feedback, work on it more

where do you think the camera should be positioned at ?

i placed it like this because it is near the mobile joy stick and for pc press the “0” key instead

could you inform what makes it too early to give feedback ? , i want to build the game with the community

You didn’t say this in the post is this a pvp or pve game

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Oh alright but for pc when they click the 0 key you should place the thing at the middle bottom like other games because it just looks more visually appealing.

I think mobile players wouldn’t mind to tap on the middle bottom either.

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i do not wanna share the idea of the game now

so the button should be above the potions frame ?

I mean like, where other shooting games mostly place it. At the bottom middle.

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the potions frame is already in the middle so it has to be above it

Maybe you can put them both together, like other games do. Like I mean, one on the middle left one on the middle right. Kinda hard to explain.

Like in the default tool system that roblox gives you where when another item is added to the backpack it moves to the side in the hotbar.

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Nice, however the gun is a bit too big. Be nice if that stock wasn’t comming though the shoulder also.
I like the up and down movement and the icons.

The model has a scale setting; lowering it slightly will adjust the overall size while keeping everything intact, including animations. Adjust the placement a bit, and it should fit better.

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