Hello there ! Few months ago I started working on this game and released it around two months ago, people seemed to like it and I invested 300 robux into ads and got 1K+ visits , it’s my first serious game . Anyway , the purpose of this post is to see developers opinions on the game , suggestions , feedback and constructive criticism . I’d also like to know if you think it is or not worth it to keep working on the game . The game’s name is ObbyVerse and it works quite different than most obbies . The difficulty changes by each ‘Chapter’ and each chapter has it’s unique features . The current chapters are : Tutorial , Alien Mayhem , Techno [WIP] . Each chapter introduces new types of stages and much more cool stuff !
By first glance, I love it. I enjoy the name of the game, the thumbnails, etc. In-game, I love it even more. I like how you put thought into each level rather than just putting three block parts and a sign. Great work, keep it up!
I have no idea what to say about this, but I don’t like that it’s floating, in my preference. I guess that’s it. Oh! And the building is not my favorite for an obby, no offense.
I love this. It’s a new and cool look to obbies, and looks like a fun game that I would play. I think you should keep going on this project cause it looks awesome.
This is great! It’s themed, a unique take on the classic obby, and you wonderfully teach how the mechanics and game works!
I only have one major gripe, and that is how long it takes to respawn. Considering that in obbys you’ll be dying a lot, it isn’t good to have 6 seconds in between fails. This can definitely bring down someone’s experience if they are having trouble on a specific part.
Also, if you didn’t know you can easily change respawn times by editing game.Players.RespawnTime
I think it’s good. It reminds me of the golden days of obbies when more of them actually had a story and creativity behind them.
However, I do agree with @DoctorBaconEater. Truly one of the most frustrating things about this obby is the respawn time. In a game where I’m dying a lot I shouldn’t have to wait 10 hours to continue
I love the design of the obstacles themselves, nice to see some level of creativity and also looks visually pleasing.
Not sure what the transferring soul thing is meant to be when you die but that should be removed and it should respawn the player quicker, it became annoying to wait very quickly.
Also, GUI overload. It’s daunting joining the game and seeing all of this facing you when you just want to play an obby. Plus the 3 screen GUIs at the top don’t scale properly when resizing the roblox window. Not sure if them always being there at all, or on the top at least, is a good idea.
Thank you so much ! That means a lot , about the respawn time I would make it a gamepass honestly not like I wanna make the game pay to win but you know , some gamepasses wouldn’t bother . And it wouldn’t cost much anyway around 50 robux at max . But thanks !
Thank you !! Yeah maybe but at the same time I feel like working on a whole other project as this one is really unorganized and for most of the scripts I watched tutorials . I’m a newbie at scripting I know just the very basics but since I did this game I’d like to make another obby with my own scripts .
Thank you for your feedback ! As I don’t have much experience and since this is my first game I do expect people to point out many things…I have no experience with GUI’s , the ‘transferring soul’ message I just decided to add it cause I thought it’d make death more interesting … About instant respawn I might make that a gamepass .
I would add a tutorial too tell the players what everything is and give them an option to teleport their.
As the text is very in your face and will drive players out of the game. The gui for donation at the top should be removed as you have a donation board and maybe make a skip stage for about 10 robux.
I feel like the little robots that shoot the lasers are unnecesary parts and i would remove them or make them look better somehow the building isnt the best and could be alot better. I looked at your showcase and if you put the same amount of effort in this game as the showcase people would probably play for alot longer. You could also make or higher someone to make some gfx for the game.
Maybe add a tower of hell style completion bar but goign across the obby as its pretty long from what i can see.
Lastly the transfering soul is ridiculously long and i would of completed the whole obby but after dieing twice it got really annoying.
Obbies like “The Impossible Obby” seem to have it too…But I do get your point . I need to make some earnings too . I don’t wanna make the game pay to win tho .
Thank you very much for the support and suggestions ! I’m pretty new at actually making proper games as I’ve been building and only building for a while . I would hire someone to help me with the GUI’s , some GFX as well…Also about the dying process I’m planning to add a cheap ‘Instant Respawn’ for it . And about the little robots I already have a new model for it ! Thank you once again for supporting my game I highly appreciate it !
Perhaps make the normal respawn time shorter, and respawning instantaneously is a gamepass. I’m a bit short on Robux right now and having to pay to not wait forever to respawn is definitely turning me off from playing it again, which is a shame because it’s a decent game otherwise
this is kinda small but theres one thing that kind of bugs me a little bit and it has to do with the lighting, theres shadows in the obby as if there a sun but… where is the sun
Bruh GG never thought anyone else would beat it ! 8 people beat it (including me) and your the 9th now ! Great job . I tried to make the obby pretty unique with not too many repetitive stuff…I’d say each stage is different in it’s way yeah I might have used some repetitive jumps cause it would be just too short . I might make instant respawn a gamepass to make some earnings out of this game , but I might lower the respawn rate by default as well but not too much . The mute button is a great idea !
Plus the 3 screen GUIs at the top don’t scale properly when resizing the roblox window. Not sure if them always being there at all, or on the top at least, is a good idea.