Feedback on my Obby

Hello! I need feedback on my game. It is in alpha so do expect bugs and do not have a high expectation. I want feedback that how I can improve my game. If it includes scripting please tell me how to as I do not know much about scripting.
Do not talk about broken VIP door because I am already aware about that.
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All feedback is accepted! :smiley:

The Obby is quite good. The difficulty is enough and good. Some stuff that I would like you to take a look into is: You got some bugs like when you die, some parts of your character touches the next checkpoint wich makes so you can skip that level. On other thing is that I suggest you to use your own UI designs, music and models as well as making you models a bit more detailed eg in the lobby. I also suggest that you make that shop button a little bit smaller it’s too big

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I Will work on that. Could I have more info? Like what needs more detail? Trees? Buildings?

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Both trees and buildings. You can make your buildings in studio and if you want them to be really good you can make them with plugins, but when it comes to 3D Models like trees if you want them to be detailed and good I suggest you make them in an application called Blender you can find info about it on YouTube. I make my 3D models there so you can make really cool models in blender.

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Hey! I just played you obby and watched a bit! The scripts and everything look good. I would only make the folder less standard. The style of spawning is quite neutral like it used to be when ROBLOX started. Take an example of Bloxtun’s Obby’s! Good luck continue with you obby!

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The game is really big, nice, and well detailed. I love it! I’d just like to point out a couple things, however.

  • For the “signs” in the game, it gets hard to read them when they’re in the player’s path. Try moving the signs to the sides, so the player can read them better.

  • The asteroids part in the obby was quite pushy. It took me many tries to land on the first asteroid, and stay there.

  • Because of the skybox never changing, the space area never feels like space. Try changing the skybox to a space theme when the player reaches the next stage.

  • Some of the Gui isn’t centered correctly, like the loading Gui.

  • I feel like the tutorial could be bigger. Right now, it’s short length makes it not so useful.

Other than this, the game is great! The music is epic, the lobby is a nice touch, and it feels like a good obby. Keep up the good work poured into this game.

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Could you please help me with making it so the sky box changes? Thanks.

Nice game! But you can add a Instant Respawn script so players do not touch the next checkpoint with their body even they are dead. Overall, pretty awesome!