Feedback on my pizza gfx

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Very good! It looks like a ROBLOX toy!

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Thanks. that was my aim XD 30chrs

Maybe add some detail to the walls, but other than that, it’s pretty good!

Looks amazing! Keep up the great work.

It good, but can you make it look like its not in a dark ally way?

Looks good, I would crop it so there’s less wall, and I would blur out the ground and wall so it doesn’t take away from the person and pizza. But good job!

Background details may not seem that important but I’d add some to the wall and other areas. Other than that, this is a good GFX!

That’s really mean and disturbing

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Can you add more lightning? It looks a bit dark, like you’re wandering around the streets at night.

That’s harsh criticism. You should be encouraging. You literally said it was “bland”.

Add more detail to the background, the pizza is blurred a little and the characters face is shining (which makes him look like he’s sweating more than papa john himself) hope this helps

Feedback does not have to be nice.This is a feedback post, not “if you dislike it you try to do better than me” post. Please refrain from going off topic :smiley:

What render are you using to make this?

Looks great, but for some reason I have an urge to move that light source to the left(relative to the camera). It might look better if you do that, I don’t know.

Good luck!

Edit: I found the reason, it’s because the middle of the chef’s head is reflecting the light and it looks kinda strange.

Please lower the amount of criticism you give out. Although it sometimes does encourage the creator to do better, often times the creator can lose self esteem and moral. I realize that not all feedback is good, however I think it’s best to refrain from saying things that would lower another’s will to work harder. I apologize if I offended you in any way, but please think twice before you give feedback.

The lighting and stuff is pretty good! Keep up the good work!

Yeah, I agree with Kosa_Peogrammer.

The lighting definitely has a good effect. Just one thing the pizza looks a bit odd, I’m not too sure what it is. But for the work you’ve done its good

It looks amazing! However, I noticed that the light is shining off the character’s face and that looks a bit unnatural.