Feedback on my SCP game, should I continue? [PART 2 OUT]

I have been working on my SCPF game, (its barely done, right now it’s just a single hallway) and I don’t know if I should work on it. I also want some feedback for better ideas or suggestions to make it better! Keep in mind, I’m a programmer, not a builder so help and tips on my building would be great (As the current hallway looks a bit bland)!



https://gyazo.com/2e90ffec51e598c8da67416e04d8b0be
https://gyazo.com/ffa5e56285541680748da813b7fcd8b9
https://gyazo.com/1230228a09eca7883e3414eba6b231dd

Thank you! :slight_smile:

(Edit: I have this post that barely anyone has seen, please could you view it as I really need help with it! Help with a camera system)

part 2:

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Of course! You should keep on continuing your project! Here are some tips I can give you:

  1. Maybe be creative with your textures and materials, don’t put in straight out full grey and diamond plates, it gives a better atmosphere for the hallway.

  2. Try to smoothen out some parts such as the edges.

  3. Be creative and mindful with your colors. I personally don’t know how an SCP lab/hallway looks exactly like, but the pink neon above seems odd.

Other than that, the detail you put in this is amazing! Keep up the good work!

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Its not pink neon, its my selection box from studio! Sorry!

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I’d suggest going lighter with the diamond plate and using slate or something similar instead, it makes it look messy and pulls the attention away.
You could also add props like plants/carts/tables if you wish, or add detail to the top and sides like machinery, vents, etc.
Overall I think it looks alright now.

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It looks very well detailed. You should definitely continue!

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@meteor0id I have tried your method, and it doesn’t look half bad! I still prefer the darker tone but this is still ok.

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(again, sorry for the purple neon!)

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I have also done it with the darker concrete, I definitely prefer this!

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Feedback on my Class D hall! Its unfinished, but I think it looks cool already.

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