Hello everybody! This is a shop I’ve built in my free time, and wanted some feedback on it.
V2: I added some shelves, re-designed the plants, added blur, and lowered the front desk. I’m stuck on whether I should make it brighter or leave it:
Brighter:
Darker:
Very nicely done! It’s big and open with the right amount of space as well as the perfect light level and building colors. Very impressive.
When I build things I like to add ambient effects to make it look nicer. (blur, camera tilt/sway, faint particles)
But even without the extra effects this looks amazing! The floor is nicely made and the guns look crazy good. (Did you make those guns yourself?)
Yes, I made the guns myself. I will definitely consider extra effects!
Nice job. Add more lighting and it’ll be perfect.
This looks really good! I feel there’s not enough stuff on the floor though, everything is on the walls. Maybe add like a shelf of ammunition or something, even it’s it’s just cosmetic.
The lighting and the colors look perfect. I agree with Herschenie that you can improve it by placing more cosmetics and decorations.
I really like your build. Good gun models! I think one thing you could add is lighting and particle effects to really make this build come to life to make it realistic ( As listed from others. ) Overall really good job!
Looks very nice as it is. Great stuff!
Really well done! The colors match greatly, everything is perfectely placed, I cannot think of something bad, this is great! 
10/10
Well built! Just make sure it has as less parts as possible. A high part count will eventually take a big impact on your game performance.
The shop looks very good; the gun models are also great; the colours tie in together very well; and overall, I can’t find any faults or room for improvement in the shop. I don’t agree with the comments saying more light is needed, I think it’s fine how it is.
Maybe add a window and change the lighting to “ShadowMap”
It is in ShadowMap. I will definently consider windows!
Very Well Done! 10/10 Building!
Well, I’m very impressed, this looks amazing! I would recommend you putting windows in and maybe, a shelf with ammunition.
I think this is a pretty nice build, I am a particular sucker for the neon-block highlights so you get points in my book for that haha. The only real thing which I can find somewhat ‘erks’ me about the build are the plants themselves- I think the color may be a bit dark and the blocky-style bush doesn’t seem to fit quite right with the highly-detailed interior of the rest of the build. Other than that, I like it 
Very well done and very detailed! I like the props and details that you added to the shop
Try putting glass over the guns on the shelves. It’s a very good build what you’ve done there.
Simple and nice looking, well done.
