Feedback on my Visual Effects (VFX)

I have been interested on visual effects lately so I made my own, I watched some tutorials and I’m starting to learn gradually… at the moment I made a couple so far and it would be amazing if you guys could send me some feedback :grinning:

Visual Effects (Animation)

Visual Effects (Images)

These visual effects were made in blender!

At the moment I’m learning on how to get the material and lightning right in order to make the scenes look more better.

Thanks for reading :grin:.

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Looks absolutely amazing. Would be awesome to incorporate something such as these into a game on Roblox or incorporate motion graphics in general to User Interface on the platform.

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Dude this is like on the same level as some phone ads! :joy:

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I could really see the first one being an incredible intro to a game!

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Yeah that would be really cool :smiley:

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Excellent job so far. The only aspect that seems off is the thickness of the waves in the vapor-wave photograph. By thinning the lines, it should look more natural in contrast to other vapor-wave based photographs.

Other than that, the utility of motion and light balance captivates your audience and overall “feels” sensational. I especially enjoy the last photograph, giving a vibrant and upbeat vibe. I can not wait to see what you create in the future.

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Although you’re still learning, you’ve done some incredible work so far! I particularly like the pentagonal prism effect and I think it would make a fantastic abstract desktop background.

If I were to offer any suggestions for possible improvements, I think the final keyframe of the spinning Roblox logo could be adjusted to ensure the logo stops in the correct rotation. At the moment, when the logo comes to a stop, it’s missing the iconic Roblox tilt, as shown above. I think it would be more accurate and impactful if the logo were accurately tilted when the animation comes to a stop.

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Yup you are right i forgot to add the tilt, i knew something was missing anyways thanks for mentioning that :grin:

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Dude I think you have potential beyond roblox games. You should start making animations for people, I bet a lot would like your work!

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Your effects are amazing! I really like them. You should make more effects and show them here!

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Maybe, but i’m still learning and trying to get better, i have been watching tutorials so that might help out!
Thanks for the feedback :grin:

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Yeah, it’s one of my favourites, it would be really cool if it was an intro to a game :smiley:
Thanks for the feedback

Looks amazing but in my opinion I would have chosen a different effect for your first animation.

Wow what impresses me what you do, I want to see more of your work! :smile:

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