Updated to:Feedback on my zombie (v2)
Hi! My name is HS, i was bored so i decided to make a zombie:
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What do you think about it? (I am very new at studio, so maybe i made some errors)
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I expected a typical zombie model with a few tweaks here and there. But this was a pleasant surprise haha. I think it looks good! What do you plan to do with it?
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Thank you! I am not so good making games, i just made it for fun 
T . You could give that lonely zombie some friends and cool accessories and make them raid roblox HQ 
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Lol, good idea! But i think that would be too much things to do
haha take your time when building something! 
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No offense but this doesn’t look like a zombie. It looks like a 2D model. Try to use rigs and customize it to look like a zombie.
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It looks good, and gives off a FNAF sort of vibe to my eyes, although it could use some major tweaks such as meshing or adding more detail, and texturing it a little better. But, this is your project and your model, so you can decide what you want to do with it. 
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Thanks! I am not good at making meshes, i will try to make the zombie better, anyways this was just a project made for fun
It’s alright, I can tell you are probably starting to get used to this sort of building style, and I respect the grind. Keep your head up and don’t let anybody discourage you. 
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Tomorrow i will post the new version!
I think it should have a face. Looks good without one but would be a neat edition to it.
Well its right foot looks a little bit off and its right arm is pretty long. I also think its to much visible bone but except from that it looks ok.
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Simplistic yet elegant. Maybe make it so that the arms are down and reduce the width of the torso a bit.
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It’s very messy. It’s disproportionate, and granite doesn’t really work well on skin. Try messing around with materials, and adding wedges and cylinders. I also suggest adding a little face for the zombie.
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These comments are giving you false hope.
This really isn’t great at all, it looks like a build from 2012.
Maybe look in toolbox for some inspiration?
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So you are saying that everyone is lying and my zombie is a trash?
I think that this is not giving me so much hope
By the way that is just a simple project, i made it to look like a blocky zombie, not a ultimate realistic zombie from left 4 dead
This doesn’t look good, it’s way too blocky, it has some clipping issues, don’t listen to the replies above. They’re all giving you false hope, don’t fall into that mess. What they should be saying is how to improve your model, which you could add a face, make it more round, better colors for the characters, etc…
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