After doing what I learned from this topic, I made a new blender GFX and I’m looking for feedback on it.
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- Noise, pls use denoiser
- Backpack is clipping into the leg?
- Obvious horizon and meh hdri
- Smooth ground??
7/10 because it is a little more creative
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This is awesome! Keep up the Extra Extra amazing work!
Forgot to ask;
What did you mean by “meh HDRI”, what’s wrong with it?
How can I make the ground appear rougher?
Not gonna speak for the person that originally commented (these are my own opinions which i think align with theirs), but i think by meh HDRI he meant the HDRI Image you used is a bit bland, infact it doesnt much look like a HDRI and more of a background colour, lacking any clouds or far scenery.
And the obvious horizon means there’s not much in the scene that’s breaking up the horizon, making the render as a whole look uninteresting,
And so a good trick in any render is to break up the horizon with the scene itself using terrain or something else, like the sillhouete of a city, or the building you have in the background, which is good, but it seems kind of lonely, so i suggest maybe make some of the farther terrain more bumpy
also the ground texture seems to be the same all around which only hurts the lack of interesting scenery in the background
However for you being new to this, its actually pretty damn good. i like how the graphics and materials fit in with something you would see in Roblox, making for a nice consistency i rarely see.
The pose is good and same with the enviroment shading, keep it up and continue evolving your craft!
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I couldn’t find one that I thought really fit with the scene so I just lowered it a little so you could see the sky. Not sure what I should have done in that situation. I tried adding a grassy mountain but it didn’t seem to blend very well as if there was no real sense of depth. Another building could have worked, as this was made for a video I made about an apocalypse survival game, trying to build a scene of sniping inside the airbase tower. I thought adding the buildings that are suppose to be there could have changed that idea or something, I’m not sure. Thank you so much for all the ideas and compliments!