Hello! I am Domderp999. Me and my team are developing a game called, “Escaped Prisoners.” As you might guess, it is a Prison Game. The game has no code yet. (We are looking for a scripter! Read here if you would like to apply: [HIRING] Prison Game Recruitment ) And we need feedback for the map! Here is a few images:
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Hey, Im liking the theme throughout this build. My one tip would definitely be to maybe add more detail and more colour. The buildings look the same, Try bit of variety you know.
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I think it looks good! Theres several things that I would improve on though. Firstly in the first picture it seems like you didn’t finish the roads? As in the other pictures I would add a curb/ sidewalk around the road to add more detail. Secondly i’m a bit confused, in the second picture there seem to be skyscrapers that turn from one shape to another. They don’t really fit in with the rest of the surrounding skyscrapers or look good, I would improve those by possibly making the entire skyscraper the same shape. Lastly I would improve on the transition between the ice area and the normal grass parts of the map. Apart from that its great!
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Aesthetics
I love the fact that you have used the low poly style, it makes the game map look very clean and modern. I also love the buildings in the city since they look extremely clean. I also like the terrain placement for hills, mountains and etc. I would suggest…
- Adding more grass to the terrain in the first image
- Using a larger selection of terrain materials in the second image
- Sticking to one type of low poly tree and re-creating it in different positions and angles since the trees are a bit random right now
- Adding snow at the peak of the large mountain in the second image
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I like the work and how you took the theme/style from Jailbreak. I do suggest making the grass color in your map less brighter and you water more realistically whiter and transparent. Otherwise this is great and keep up the good work.
It looks amazing. Keep up the good work 
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The only thing I find off is the roof on the skyscrapers for the tallest ones in the city. I can’t wait for this game to come out, it looks beautiful. 