Feedback on Shotgun Model

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#1

Hello, Roblox developer community! So, I made a new weapon model today. How does it look? Which variation should I put on my portfolio?

Variation #1

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Variation #2

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Which variation should I use for my portfolio?
  • Variation #1
  • Variation #2

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#2

I think the first one looks more realistic, I also think you should look into PBR because the shotgun looks very flat (also, try toning down the reflectance, it’s too shiny).

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#3

The handle of the gun is a bit weird tho maybe change it up a bit unless there’s a model that looks exactly like this

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#4

I think gun’s barrel’s front part should be smaller. However, if it is like this in real life it is ok.

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#5

I’m not sure if it’s intentional, but I’d suggest sharpening the edges on the front of the barrel, unless you intentionally made it look more round by smoothening the angles. Other than that, maybe add a trigger and PBT materials as Phoenixwhitefire said.