Hey there! I just made this simulator map and wanted some feedback on it. Is there anything I could add to this to make it better?
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It looks really good but I think you should add more stuff to the middle it looks empty.
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I agree with EHGTR1903, add some more decoration to the middle of the shop area.
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I love it, like EHGTR said, I think you should add something at the empty spaces, due to it looks empty there. 
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Independently, you have created a great build. It is vibrant, colourful and has great variety. However, by now we all know the cartoon theme has been a predominant theme in Roblox currently. A prime example would be Adopt Me because children love getting adopted in a cartooni-sh atmosphere. Due to this, despite being a great build in general, I do not think it would be appealing to quite a lot of people. Especially because it is a simulator, and there are plenty of simulators currently. I’ve repeat what I have said to people with similar topics, add something that makes it yours. Something unique that differentiates your game and your builds from everyone elses.
Have a good day.
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it look quite well looking, you also can put a leader board, crate, bush, fountain and anything else that related to simulator game. the lightning are pretty good plus the make the simulator much more pretty in picture and also in-game as well and i was wondering…
Question
what kind of simulator are you making on anyway?
what the title of the of the game you are working on?
and lastly,
are you working alone or working with friends?
Anyway…
the picture good and the game look good as well. but you also need the best thing to do in the studio or something that can make player stay for a little longer/ fun feature.so i hope you planed this out and I always see you next time…
Seeya!
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It’s actually gonna be a basic simulator which I’m making to practice my scripting and building.
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Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try to make it better.
so what is the basic simulator you can think off?
Just a simulator with a tool to collect strength or points, selling points to get coins and using coins to buy better tools and stuff.
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I personally think it should have more color. I also think you should add more areas depending what type of sim it is.
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This is a very nice map. I’d recommend adding an obby, or something around the map just to fill people’s time. Also, I’d recommend adding more colour, maybe changing the colour of the sell store.
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I agree with the user above, the sell store could be a different color because it blends in with the surroundings. I like the landscape that surrounds the sell and shop place, but there could be some extra ‘landmarks’ to fill in the spaces. Good job so far, it looks good!
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Lots of green. It seems the floor is made from a single mesh part? Well, for a whole simulator map its quite small. Perhaps add a valley behind the sell/shop buildings? The terrain is odd looking. I’d suggest changing the sell shop to red/adding an NPC guide/adding sunrays as it enhances the quality of the game. Most simulator games have a bubbly GUI too. This is a good build by the way
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It’s definitely looks good! I would highly recommend making some other types of trees instead of copying and duplicating them around the map area and there seems to be more empty spots throughout the map I would consider filling them out with other types of models. Try to add more vibrant colors at the moment the building seems to hold the same design try to change, the bricks as they seem to blend in with the building looking a bit unnatural.
Your map looks pretty neat on the other hand! I would suggest adding some more detail because it looks plain in my opinion. Try adding some rocks around with different size and color, some grass and shrubs in some corners, rocky paths, mushrooms, e, fountain, flowers, ect. Definitely expand the map as it seems rather small do place more on the map such as more stores, shops maybe more islands something like that could work.
Anyways, it’s looking good at the start.
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Maybe make it a little less dark and fill in with coins and more!
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pretty nice, but i think the shop and sell location is a bit empty, maybe you could ad random buildings that dont do anything as decor
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Hello Developer,
First of all, I like how you have different variations of the trees around, which gives your place a lot more variation and detail. I would suggest making almost every building different, for example leave the shop building, and make the ‘‘sell’’ building, a bank or something related to money perhaps, depending on what simulator game you’re making. You can also add bushes around to give the ground a little bit more variation.
In the middle, you could add a water fountain perhaps, so the whole spawn doesn’t look too empty.
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Hi, I think I need to add many more different small details. So that the middle is not empty. In general, it’s beautiful I like it, good luck.
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I think you should add some random part of grasses, mushrooms, flowers…etc
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