Feedback on song

I was just messing around on piano and it turned into this. Any feedback? It’s still an early draft.

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It sounds funky and groovy, like what I’d hear in a city game or maybe some elevator music… Anyways, I like it, and it definitely worked out! Great work! :musical_keyboard: :musical_note: :slightly_smiling_face:

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That’s amazing, good job dude.

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Can I use this song in my game its so cool?

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I would rather you not use this but you can hire me for another track.

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No need bro thanks for replying I will not use it and I doesn’t hire you too because I dont have money I would if I have because you are so good :+1:

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Your percussions could get some extra working to improve it, where you can put something before the transition. Crashes are common, but you can always experiment with alternating the repetitive pattern into something else through a transition.

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Yeah I’ve actually been working on my drum fills recently

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I like this song! It’s well made and funky! I could dance to this all day!

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I find that the song has a lot noise and isnt able to control it but I like the 80’s ninja turtle vibe (the video game not the tv or movie) its going in the right direction but needs more smoothness and make it able to be heard and not be so confusing for the listener itself

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