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@RaxdiiGames I changed it
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Now, this just looks amazing.
The Cartoon style makes it look even better, and it does remind me of the games I used to play on tablets (ex. Kingdom Rush, etc.)
The outline of the banner does kinda look cut incorrectly, but this looks nice!
9.5/10
EDIT: Nice improvement!
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This looks spectactular,But you should make the background a blurry transparent look when like the round is finished
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Looks great, 9/10. Love the cartoon theme, but I have a question what changes did you make in the second photo to improve the first one?
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Try making the wood colour darker.
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There isn’t much I can say abou tthis. It’s great.
It really has a great theme and it reminds me of games I used to play as a kid. Or a clash-of-clans type game.
Have you tried a small outline (around 1-3 pixel or something) around the wings?
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I love it. It feels like I am not even playing ROBLOX but a whole other game. There is really not much to say.
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The victory screen looks great! What style of game is it? I think it might fit in with a castle like game.
I would change the game so that the max level is higher than level 40 but still a really good design
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That’s awesome that you guessed that because this screen pops up right after you win your boss battle in a castle!
The dark shadow below the emblem
Wow! This is amazing! This looks so good you did a really nice job👍
I would suggest to make the ribbon for victory to be a bit more round not a lot just a little,
Other than that great work 
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This looks pretty good, I have nothing to complain about except the coin. It’s a little optimized and looks out of place. But still its pretty well done.
[Update] I’ve added three stars to it
Feedback:
- Victory is easy to read, but the amount of $ is not as easy to read.
- Level bar coloring should be changed (blue or purple maybe)
- Although this isn’t necessarily advice for the design of the piece, I suggest you or whoever program client-side ui animations make the wings flap and the stars burst when you actually win so it’s like a screen explosion of eye candy
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It’s great, but I’d suggest using Roblox’s fonts so you can change the values. I might be wrong.