Hello!,
can you help me with your special Feedback?
is it because I want to know about my creation and talk about the build I have made like a few hours.
the Game ID is… this,
https://www.roblox.com/games/4687600969/talk-about-it
I hope you have a wonderful day,
cya.
Looks good so far.
You could expand the build and add things for ambience, and also play around with the lighting to add some form of atmosphere/realism.
how big you wanna be? 
Hey there! Lovin’ it, especially when it comes to the use of material & placement of plants etc. I’d say if you were to make a whole street of these builds to create realism for a city or something like that, might give more purpose to users who join.
All the best,
Jack
Thank You, Jack!
I really appreciate that, the other building will come out soon but still this is a good start for my skills in my building.
thx for feedback.
This is a great start. I say great start because all games have somewhere they can expand in. I could see this restaurant being much nicer if you where able to put a few tables inside that are visible from the outside. I believe someone else said it but it would look even better if you messed around with color corrections, sun rays, bloom, and blur, and maybe changed your lighting technology to ShadowMap.
Would definitely recommend changing the roof style, the current roof style is kinda wack and doesn’t look good at all this way. You should mess with the environment around the restaurant to fit the building style, you should also mess around with the lighting to make it look a lot more nice and clean, as a few people have already recommended. Before making these lighting changes, change your lighting to ShadowMap, so these changes actually look good after making them. You should also change the inside of the restaurant’s color, black doesn’t look that great.
This is an amazing start to a Restaurant. I’d recommend adding an inside to the Restaurant as well as adding textures to the walls. I also think you should add windows or decorations outside to make it look even better. Other than that it’s a good start.
Firstly, I would prefer if I didn’t have to join the game just to get actual visuals on how your build feels and looks. I’d rather just look from screenshots provided, and then perhaps join the game to get a more constructive look at it.
-For more info on how to make a better thread, I’d suggest checking out this post by Aotrou: How to Make a Quality "Looking for Feedback" Thread
Feedback—
Right into it, I notice something that comes off as a eye sore which is the roof of the restaurant. It’s far too tilted at about a 50’ degree angle, which gives it a bit of a weird look that in my opinion doesn’t come off too well. I would make the roof less than what it is, and rotate it to about a 30’ degree or less angle
The mix of different red colors is fabulous in this build, however having a secondary color to go along with it perhaps such as white or a grey wouldn’t be bad to include. I would prefer that if implemented correctly.
Whilst just wandering around your build, I couldn’t help but notice the lack of details everywhere on your build. There just seemed to be nothing there to add a more natural feeling to it. Perhaps using cracks and or textures would make it feel more alive. When I say this, I mean just search up mud or wall cracks to add to your build. It would make the walls feel a lot more natural and realistic. Perhaps even had a pathway around the building and a secondary entrance.
I could give you an onslaught of more suggestions to add, however it would completely change the overall appearance of your restaurant. If I was you, I would go back to my build and add some changes and more complex architectural structures to the build to make it more realistic and modern rather than just a square. This could come down to a numerous of things such as the following;
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In case you are wondering by what I mean on the entrance with a waiting room, it would be something as simple as this.
I hope you have a marvelous outcome for your restaurant and I wish you the best of luck. 
Looks pretty good right now but here’s some suggestions to help out, The posters could use to be thinner, right now they are pretty thick. The awning has a bit of if i recall people call it z clipping or something like that, basically you can see bits of the other models next to it shift in and out of view as you move the camera around this could be avoided better by having every other piece ever so slightly pulled/pushed in. I would also suggest pulling the dumpsters out enough that the back wheels aren’t collided with the buildings base brick.
Good luck with continued building
I like it so far, but needs some a little bit of more work and detail in there.
Good choice, I will do that and expand the restaurant a little bit bigger.
Thx for feedback, I will make the poster much thinner than thick.
LOL,…Thick. 
thx for the picture, I will copy it like irl but in Roblox. but it will take a long way to do it
Shouldn’t take that long to implement as it’s a simple build, but I can understand if it takes you a while to build, for someone like me (sounds like I have a ego) it wouldn’t take me hardly any time to build.
Also, instead of responding to each person in different messages, you can just reply to them all at once in one message to save time and possible bumping unintentionally. Not trying to control how you should use the forums, but just a thought for you to remember. 
it will take some time because I need to scale it and how what materials I must use…
plus the new Uptade for the new building is here but it’s not the picture you show me.
and I hope you understand.