It’s really nice!
I only have two issues I have with this, the black frame doesn’t cover the whole of the screen, so you can see a few pixels of the game in the background. (Although this is rare, it just comes and goes for no reason, I use 1920 by 1080)
Secondly, the fading effect that you use for the text and that one image doesn’t feel smooth it felt jittery.
Over-all, a very good start for your first intro; Needs some improvements but that’s it.
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I definitely know what your talking about with the fading effect on the image, I’ll try to make that more smoother by screenshotting it so the text and image are one, rather than fading a text and image at the same time itll just have to fade one image.
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Hi there! It looks great from my POV just a few issues. the intro frame does not cover the whole screen. From the other feedback I saw it looks like you have it covered. The second one is that the logo’s during the intro are either not centered or it’s my laptop. But overall it’s a great experience and I love the builds! Keep it up.
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Thank you for your feedback, I’ll definitely go back and check on how centered the text and things are!
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To be honest, your game looks amazing, I don’t think there’s much you can approve but when I was playing your game I was jumping and I somehow got in a bed and I was stuck there for quite a while so you should try fixing that otherwise looks amazing, props to you!
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Thank you for pointing this out, I should definitely lower the jump power since I see no reason why there would be much jumping in my game if any
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You should probably remove jump.
that’s some pro gamer content over here
the guis are not perfectly adjusted tho, that means if you play in the lowest resolution it might mess up
fix : use scale instead of offset for the size
gif :
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I think I fixed it I have just discovered anchorpoint, as far as I know that should fix the problem occuring.
I really like the intro, it’s very well made. I can see above that I was a bit late to this, so everything was fixed in the intro that I can see as of right now.
I would add a stamina feature to this game when you continue your progression, because I can hear the breathing when the intro is completed. I also noticed the breathing randomly stops after a few seconds upon entering also. Most games like these have a stamina feature implemented, so I would try to add one!
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Wow! I am so impressed by this intro, and its one of the best intros I have seen across the platform! You really incorporated the music with the text, and did a great job putting it all together. I thought I was watching a movie and forgot that it was Roblox! Great job and keep up the great work!
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Sprinting will most likely become a feature in the game so I’ll definitely try to incorporate a stamina bar and maybe when the players stamina is low they have the heavy breathing. The heavy breathing is set to stop 20 seconds after the intro ends, but the full audio used for the heavy breathing is around 40 seconds long. Should I just play the full heavy breathing audio or leave it at 20 seconds?
Awesome! I’m very happy to hear your very generous compliments! 
I feel like the water looks strange and doesn’t fit the theme, maybe try more than just a brick on the ground? (I thought it was carpet at first)
EDIT: so as it turns out it was like this because I have my graphics quality set to 1
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That is roblox terrain water, it looks odd when you have lower end settings, if you turn up your graphics manually the water looks very good, try setting your graphics to 8 or 9 to get a better effect
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Ohh… My bad, I am forced to have my graphics quality set to 1 otherwise I have 1-10 fps. (my computer is from the 90s. I wasn’t even born when my parents bought it)
Thats alright, theres nothing you can do about it other than upgrade your computer, i might try to find a compromise so players with lower end PC’s still get a good water effect, but for right now i dont know how to get around this
Greetings! 
Found a little bug in your intro, if you reset your character mid game the Intro will play again, other then that you did a great job! 
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Thank you for pointing this out, I know how to fix it and I will definitely have that changed 
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