Lol im learning scripting and when making a string value you need put the “” so i geuss i was typing too fast ha ha forgot my bad thanks for pointing it out
Haha.
But it shows, that you have learned!
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That is so true only been on roblox studio for about 1 month now haha
You have learned alot for only beeing there 1 month! Wow.
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thanks ive been putting in endless hours so im exspecting good results next year . . . nvm it already is next year so i geuss . . .
HAPPY NEW YEARS!!! 
It is very hard to believe that you have developed this sense of artistic ability to accurately design a realistic architecture. Though I do know people that has accomplished similar feats before… Nontheless, if you have only been building for a week it is pretty darn impressive. The biggest issue I have with this build is that the quality is pretty inconsistent, where you make some basic mistakes here and there. If you’re not building with a grid on, I suggest you do that.
Other than that! Work on utilising lighting and improve textural design by making them yourself! While I realise I said this before on another post of yours, read into colour theory yet again, I am aware you didn’t have time to read the article I sent and recolour but for your future builds, I suggest you do.
Something in the real world may work but in Roblox it may not. And vice versa. Having gloomy colours and textures may disrupt the fun of a player and affect them while they are playing.
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I Am Going To Read it i actually pinned the website so i don’t forget thanks again for you feedback I’ve been learning build and have had some sleepless nights learning by watching simple tutorials. once again thanks and Happy New Year
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I agree with most of the other posts. The outside is great, but the interior needs some work. I’m not sure if you’re planning to sell this to a cafe group or as a model for a game, but make it more modern if it’s for a cafe group.
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The exterior looks great although the “order here, pay here, and wait here” signs seem a bit off. They are very large and don’t really match the whole scheme of the coffee shop. I do agree that the interior needs a lot more work as well. Other than that the exterior looks nice.
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its like a starbucks but its a coffee shop
Just going to say, this looks like an outstanding build for a beginner. I would say the inside needs more improvement, however, the outside looks fantastic.
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thanks alot but as i said above the picuture i did nto do anything for interior
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Yeah I get that, I wasn’t saying to remove them, the signs just look big personally. Maybe it’s just a me thing but I was referring to something like this:
On the left side the writing kinda fits in with the window and doesn’t seem to be thrown on top of it (not that there’s anything wrong with it). It’s just an idea and like I said it might just be a me thing haha. The rest looks great though, very realistic and I love the plants
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Thanks a lot I Actually have a great idea for the windows now 
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@Stylxus I think it needs more liveliness to the build, maybe some bushes lining the windows on one side?
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oh ok thanks alot will keep that in mind
Looks a lot better from the outside, you need to work on the wall pattern, it looks very strange with all the different type of walls on the inside. Another thing I noticed is the checkered floor. It doesn’t look that great with the checkered floor, with it, it looks more like an ice cream parlor in the 70’s. But hey, it’s good for a first coffee shop build.
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its not final im still working on it when i get time
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The outside looks pretty awesome, but you might do something on the signs like TheLionStrikes said.
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Looks good from the outside! maybe add some signs and chairs and tables.