It is not immediately apparent to me that this is an FBI game. Perhaps adding “FBI” on the backs of the soldiers’ uniforms would help with that. My first impression when seeing this is that it’s some kind of S.W.A.T. game, since those are more common.
Also, the criminal blends in just a bit too well with the car / rest of the background, making it slightly difficult to notice him at a first glance.
I think it looks really nice! One thing I’ll say is the lighting is very flat overall and the emergency lights on the Bearcat are much deeper hues of red and blue than you’ll see in real life, maybe try using an emission texture?
Oh nice. Btw I suggest you photoshop some rain in, and mybe some faint fog in the background, small details increase renders looks by a lot, also theres puddles on the ground so rain would only make sense…