First off the descs grammar needs to be checked, next give us an idea of what we are playing, I get that we need to survive, but wth is a crazy? Tell us why this game is better than the 1000+ other survive the __ games, you gotta make us hooked the second we see the game!
Also where you say you added new stuff, say what stuff, stop being so vague, like you said
“added new items”, great, what are these items???
To give credit where its due, I do like the thumbnail a lot lol.
in this game you have to survive the crazy until the end of the round , what makes it different is it is unique items , maps and mechanics like crouching and jumping from broken walls , for sure it not better than all 1000+ games but at least it is a good game , how i can make you hooked the second when you see the game ? , i added like 10 + items and it is hard to write all of their names , and thank you for your feedback !
There’s no way to somehow make your game successful, it basically depends on luck, experience and opportunity. If your game is good and people likes to play it, then u might have a chance of sticking people to it, but if you don’t have help from thirds or people who could promote your game, it’s almost surely that your game won’t get anywhere. Roblox ads barely work getting you around 1-2k visits with the minimum amount of money (6k robux), my best suggestion, is pray and wait.
If you have money, you can spend it to make your game succeed at least temporarily. If you DON’T have money, then it’s pure luck, there’s no guide to success, best you can do is make a good game and get people to play it, there are other ways that would be counted as “cheating” (abusing roblox’s poor management of tags and titles) to increase players, but that could get you in troubles.
Use social media, create discord servers, tell friends, get people to share the game, that’s the only way to make people play it because if no one knows the game, no one will play it.
i thought about sponsoring the game with 10k robux , but what if nothing happened ? this gonna be a money waste , and as i said i have been updating the game for over a year now and i started to lose hope and thinking about it is a time waste
i already made some videos about it but no one entered it , i already have a discord server for my games , friends will only play it like once or two and then forget about it
I am glad you are seeking feedback from us in order to improve your game.
There are multiple issues that are preventing your game from reaching it’s full potential, but no worries! I will list down every issue that will need to be addressed. If you want your game to receive attentions by your desired target audience.
As you can see in the picture above, the picture shows that the lighting is not good, there are few reasons why it is considered poor:
1. Too much brightness
In the picture, the lighting is so bright that you can not even see my face. This is not pleasuring and even painful to our eyes. Every details in the map has became less visible due to too much lightness in the certain area (causing large shadow on other parts of the area).
Suggestion
It is best that you seek insipiration from other high-quality horror games available on Steam, they often have great lighting, which you can do research on that in order to gain an understanding on what is good lighting. I also recommend watching some Roblox high-quality tutorials about lighting.
2. Low Quality Models
As the title suggest, the models shown in the video are poorly made, it looks like they were made in Roblox Studio. This is not great if you aim to make your game as high quality as possible to make the game appealing for potential players to play.
Suggestion
I highly recommend that you use Blender for the purpose of designing some models for your game. They allow for creation of better quality of models with better control as well as some configuration to help make your models more appealing.
If you want, you may hire some modelers, you must understand that the amount of rates they charge is high for high-quality models that you seek, though.
3. Poor UI, No Music, NOTHING!!!
There are a lot of issues in the user interface areas such as bad spacing, bad coloring, poor decoration, not colorful, not appealing.
There is no music as well as sounds, if you wish to make your game more interesting, please implement these things as they help a lot in engagement.
Conclusion
There are a lot of issues with you game, they are so bad that you must re-make game from scratch if you wish to fix all the issues.
thanks for your feedback ,
the problem is that lighting is different on mobile on mobile it normal with any issues , i made these models in blender already high quality models have many faces and this could make the game laggy for poor devices , there is already music and sounds in the game and you can make it loader in the settings tab , it is not a simulter game to have colorful ui , did u played a round of the game ?
Your badges seem to be broken. Only 23 got the ‘welcome’ badge (you have 1,736 visits) and only 3 got the ‘victory as crazy’ badge (very unlikely for only 3)
EXTRA EDIT 2
Your gamepasses are too expensive. Imagine 399 for 2x coins only if you win. And about the 3x Crazy chance, 499 is just too much, knowing the fact you can’t reverse (people should either be able to pick less chance or more chance, or the gamepass should be cheaper).
how ? just join the game and you will get the welcome badge , defeat all the players as the crazy to get the crazy badge , survive one round as a survivor to get the surviving badge.
Hi guys it has been a long time since i have posted this post , if you do not know i have already abandoned the game after this post , after that i have created my own community to hold on my future projects , but i have needed a way to get some people in my community so i thought about updating the game ! , i have already posted a post about that topic and most of you voted that updating it may get me some members in my community and i have actually updated the game once again after abandoning it for 3 months , i have took your feed back in mind so i have reworked the lobby , improved the Ui , improved the lighting and much more , i am writing this letter because i need your feed back , a lot of people told me that the game has potential after the update and even i got some people wants to buy it ! , if you want just a small message of feed back will be helpful and appreciated