How can I improve on this building?

This is one of my first builds that didn’t seem to be that bad. What do you think and how can I improve it?

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I’d suggest you make an interior as it will add colors since there are so many windows.

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You could add furniture and use a nice, well blended wood texture that will match the building better :slight_smile:

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Try not to make it just gray try to make the floors a Light Brown, and the walls could be like a Pink/Light Brown Color and add furniture, and that’s about it :slightly_smiling_face:

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  1. Add some form of barrier between the bottom of the bottom windows and the floor. I’d suggest a wall with windowsill or bushes. Just makes it more realistic in my opinion.

  2. On the inside, short couches and tables would work, but try to keep it from blocking the beautiful windows (owo so much natural light) I don’t know the purpose of the building so I can’t really make too many suggestions for interior.

  3. One side of the outer portion doesn’t match the other… I may be the only one bothered by or even noticing this though, so take that one with a grain of salt…
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I will complement your spiral staircase and awesome windows though. The color scheme will be great with the addition of green, blue, purple… just about anything. You could even make every level have a different secondary color oooooooo… (Creative brain goes crazy)

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I would suggest giving the entrance a little roof with pillars coming down from it. Here is an example:

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@UnOfficial_101 Are you interested in selling that build? I have been experimenting in studio for spread out days and I think your build is exactly what I am looking for. I request about :robux_gold: 100

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Sorry. I deleted the build in this time. I hope you find what you’re looking for!

More details and ceiling lights like these:
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Add more color to it, it’s too plain. Also you need to change the interior wall textures, they look very odd and strange. Make a proper entrance, with a door and decoration.

Hello!

This is looking pretty good so far! I really like the number of windows that you’ve included.

From my perspective, it looks like you’re trying to capture a modern atmosphere. At the moment, the build looks bland and boring, so perhaps you could add balconies, a garage and possibly an add-on. (as in an extra room.) Extra exterior is greatly appreciated, and adds character to a build- Try adding plants, walkways/pathways, terrain, etc.

Here’s an example that looks similar to your build-

You’re only using two colours. I highly recommend experimenting with new textures, designs, and colours to add flair and contrast.

I’m very excited to see what your final result is! Good luck & thank you for reading~

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Give more color to the exterior and the interior of this build! Since this looks more like some modern house to me, I suggest adding some luxurious looking furniture inside.

Add some furniture inside, a path/driveway on the front, and maybe add some detail to the inside like beams or something. And instead of having grey floors, maybe try different colors!

-Skewl

An interior is needed on a building with such a large amount of windows. I would personally add a glass door at the entrance and do the interiors on a white-grey-black scale to match with the building, else you could make them colorful to give some kind of contrast, your choice. I would add something on the top, maybe a small glass dome. Something that really triggers me is that the left side of the front face is different from the right, make them the same. For being one of your first builds I gotta say it is really nice.
Keep building and have a nice day!

Privacy is a thing, i suggest less windows, more colours and some furniture.

I would suggest adding an exterior to the building(garden, hedges, general plants, etc.) Also a decent amount of furnishing(rugs, carpets, chairs, televisions, etc.). Overall the exterior of the actual house looks pretty decent.

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Aside from lack of furnishing, i’d recomend you to make the entrance a bit more decorated,like some sort of path or doors