How can my "setting up the town scene" be improved?

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#1

Hello! I am currently working on a train scene, where the player sets up his or hers town.

Video:

After the fade in white, they teleport to their new town.
Their town will be completely blank, maybe a few rivers or hills, but that will all be randomized.

Features:

  • Ability to use their DisplayName or Username
  • Choose towns name (With a filter)

If you find a little flaw, please let me know what it is so I can take a look at it. It can be a UI flaw, scripting flaw, or even a building flaw, or even you want something to be changed or be different.

Please let me know, thanks, WE!

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#2

Will the tagged out names be accepted if they press I’m sure? Or will it be declined?

#3

It will be accepted. The popup after clicking confirm is so they can review their name after it was filtered.

#4

I would just decline the name entirely, I’m sure some people will be pissed when then accidently press I’m sure. :stuck_out_tongue:

#5

Well the intent of the screen is to make sure people don’t get pissed if they were to name their town “Discordland”.

#6

But people could still press I’m sure. I would just have a popup that says “This name isn’t appropriate for Roblox”.

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#7

The scene looks great, although the music was too loud. Anyways one thing I would change is where in the gui it says “2”, change it to “two”, it just makes the text look nicer imo. Other than that you did a great job on this!

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#8

The subway or train is too blocky, you should add more detail and round objects on it

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#9

Very nice scene, though as Shadow said, you could add some more detail to the train, possibly making it more rounded.

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#10

Very nice, great job!! :clap: :clap: :clap:

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#11

*snaps fingers* I understood that reference.

I think it looks very nice! The music is kind of loud, but I love how it looks so far!

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#12

I recommend you to add some textures on the ceiling and make it so the camera is closer to the character. Pretty good otherwise though.

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#13

This intentionally reminds me of animal crossing, if you need builders, etc or testers, I am here.

Also, with the sort of style of the intro I feel it would be better for you to do a low poly cartoony style.

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#14

The subway is good! although, the guys feet clip through the seat a bit. but other then that, Its good!

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#15

I don’t really like how you mixed 2 Gui styles . Other than that looks good

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#16

It looks fantastic! But that train looks too big in proportion to the npc, make it smaller anyway it’s an amazing scene!

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