Here is the loading screen in question:
Can I get some feedback?
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Feedback :
As shown in the video,
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Interface :
3.5/5It’s good, but it looks off.
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Most likely due to the slightly stretched images, especially the characters.
Also, I would recommend changing the Roblox Studio logo to the Roblox logo at the beginning. -
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Overall Rating :
3.5/5It has its’ appeal, but definitely requires more execution.
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Something to enhance this would be the movement of the UI being tied with the cursor, giving it the more wobbly feel. Otherwise, well done, it is similar enough to the actual one.
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Hello thank you for the feedback for the UI being tied with the cursor do you have an example of what you mean?
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So good!! Although you could probably improve a little the environments or backgrounds of each character by adding more details, but anyway that if you want it to look perfect, but don´t worry it´s so good.
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This should be used in a GTA roblox game! Does Roblox Theft Auto exist?
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Well I am working on a GTA inspired game so if you wana check it out join the discord which is the pinned comment in the youtube video so check it out!
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Thank you so much for the feedback if you want to check out more sneak peeks join the discord which is the pinned comment in the youtube video so check it out!
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Very nice, and distinct from most experiences on the platform with loading screens that usually end up going with a generic loading bar or just a large spinning circle.
I do believe that some polishing could be done with things like lighting of the characters and/or backgrounds. There seems to be a separation between the lighting on the environments and the lighting for the characters, which makes things look somewhat imbalanced and off.
Ultimately, its good, but further polishing can be done to bring it the extra mile.
P.S; Someone mentioned replacing the Roblox Studio logo with the main Roblox logo, but I’d say that it should just be removed entirely. People would already know that its on Roblox and developed on Roblox due to the nature of how Roblox works. It’d be like if Rockstar put the Steam or Epic Games store icon when you loaded up GTA V.
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I dont like it man you got some skill issue.
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I think it looks nice however some things i believe can be improved. Such as:
- Try making the background and character sprites move more smoothly, right now they look and feel a little choppy.
- The sprites should start moving before the actual transition starts (Or at the same time as the transition) rather than only after it’s been finished. It looks a little jarring seeing the sprites be static until the transition fully ends.
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i think the character renders vs. the actual background looks really off, so kindof have the same style of graphics for both the characters and the background
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Yes i agree with u i was thinkimg about the same thing about the graphics
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gets the job done, although i would style the background images with a filter or something similar to fully get that GTA 4 style
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Oh lol nice to see you again its been awhile
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Maybe ill do that in the future
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Thank you for the advice ill work on tha
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Sure ill remove it do you have any suggestions on what I should replace it with?
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This looks awesome! Though the images are slightly squished.
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Thanks if your interested in more sneak peeks or want to be notified when game release is check the pinned message in the youtube video
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ok, that’s a new one
interesting
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