I'm looking for feedback and ideas for my story game

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So I have been working on a… quite weird story game.

I would highly appreciate any feedback as well as ideas.

Note : The game attached is no where near complete AT ALL!! It has been under work from only about two days. I am just confused on how to proceed and hence came looking for help here. Forgive me for the hardly 2 minutes of gameplay that I am asking your feedback on. I’m gonna keep working on this game. I would also like to say that I am a beginner at development and therefore some stuff is pretty basic.

The game : (1) story - Roblox

(servers are singleplayer until I make a lobby)

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You are going to need to open the game up to the public if you want feedback from players :wink:

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Oops my badddd! It is public now

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Does this go into #help-and-feedback:game-design-support Or am I just going crazy?

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Pretty good, just a couple things you need to add to make it better.

  • Better Grammar for the Talking Dialogue.
  • The NPC’s Name, make it more simple.
  • I know your not done yet, but make sure to make the story a little more interesting!

Otherwise, I really like it. It’s really vibe concepts. Good Job for only two days!

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thanks for your feedback.

-My friend is going to write the dialogues his english is better than me.
-Yes, I’m thinking something like “Ringmaster”
-Yes! there will be plot twists! and some of them I do not understand myself!!

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I could also see this topic working in the #help-and-feedback:cool-creations category.

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Actually I was confused between coolcreations and dev discussion. I didnt think of game design support. It is so confusing!

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Oh, Alright. Keep up the good work. It’s good for like a vibe hangout, but it’s only been two days, so no judgement.

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This should go #help-and-feedback:cool-creations quickly before its flagged!

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say no more (charrrrrrrlimitttt)

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I think the game is actually really interesting! Those music special effects are very good!
Send me a message when/if you update the game!

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