I finished working on this in just 1 hour and I really wanted to share my work.
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I love what you did with the water but the trees seem to impacted and the image blocks some of my veiw cause of how bright the sun is.
There isn’t much that can be discerned from
a single image, especially when the majority of the image is too dark to make out.
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A very well framed piece with great use of post processing! However, your trees are unnaturally symmetrical and equal height. Consider adding variations in the general shape, height especially. Your mountain is also very empty, it’s uncharacteristically smooth and green for how high up and rigid is, and the lack of trees and rocks compared to the surrounding scenery greatly contrasts that. I suggest doctoring it up and putting a little more attention into said mountain.
Overall a great piece, but one that could definitely use more attention to detail. Good luck!
If you could add a few more screenshots from different angles It would be more helpful. Form what I can see I dont see a lot of landscaping/decor. 
I would possibly add a dock in the water and maybe even a boat just to add some detail.
This looks incredible. I love the way the sunlight impacts the rest of the scene.
A few possible ideas:
- Add something in the middle of the lake (an island, a boat, etc.) This will give a viewer something to focus on in the center of the image and it will also be a bit more of added detail.
- The mountain serves as a really cool backdrop but is only on one side of the image. I think it would be quite cool to have a second mountain on the left side with the sun between them.
Overall an amazing piece of work!
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