This is perfect! Just fix the lighting.
9.5/10
Hey. That looks really nice, well done. The only thing is the terrain, it could be improved - maybe use roblox terrain. Other than that, I think it looks great!
Sorry, I’m super late but my idea to make it look a bit better could be adding more of an outside area e.g. some tables outside and maybe even a beach. You could also even add a pool or pebbles/rocks to the beach.
It looks very creative and innovated. However, I would make it look less gloomy.
The cafe looks really nice. I like the details of the cafe like the one-seat couch. I might wanna take inspiration from you based on creativity by the look of the images.
For extra improvement, I agree with @jordonh23, at the last picture, try adding some plants-in-pots at the edge of the barrier which gives a more cafe feeling to it.
And the lighting seems kinda dull I think. Try brightening up a little bit.
Oh yea the terrain, if looking from the insde of cafe, looks gorgeous, but from the outside, not so great.
Once done all of this, and walla! A delightful looking cafe.
Good luck on your progress of your builds!
Hey it looks great! But it kinda feels more like a jewellery store because of the empty spaces in some places