Wow that looks nice! I suggest that you turn the spawning part thing’s can collide to false and the transparancy to 1. You could also add some bushes or flowers near the spawn.
I agree with budmomo, a few name ideas are (You don’t have to use these because they are bad):
(CharacterName)'s Adventure
(CharacterName)'s Odyssey
(Name of your world)
Or anything else perterning too your world.
You should also change all of the names of the towns and NPCs. Try an online fantasy name generator for the names of the NPCs and look at old English names for your towns.
You game looks like it could be incredibly fun, I hope you don’t lose interest in this game. Remember, if you have any problems the Roblox Developer Forum is here to answer your questions!