Need help making a map

Alright I am absolutely CRAP at building. I suck more than a 1 year old making maps and so I tried fixing that. I tried making a desert military map? I have no ways of explaining THIS:


How can I improve it? For the sake of learning?

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Your build looks alright so far, what I’d recommend changing is to make your builds more detailed by utilizing depth, add foliage like some small grass bits and some stones, and lastly, either change or remove the entrance gate.

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Alright Ill do that in a bit because right now I am busy.

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Yea i am a hopeless case.

Yea i am a hopeless case.

Already looks better! What I’d recommend changing is spacing the cacti and plants out more and having them not only in the middle. Also, the dark green grass field looks kind of unnatural and random, because it doesn’t blend in well with the sandy floor.

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Added more patches and more cacti and fixed color?

If its not the color please tell me the color!

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Already looks much better now!
You were open to feedback - and this is the result!
Can I ask what type of genre the map is made for?

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This is so beautiful! I like it.

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Oh, just a simple FPS zombie game.

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Wait what? wow… thanks.

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I think it looks good, it’s common to often think your work is worse than you think it is, but i promise you it is good

Well thank you a lot!
I did though updated the map a bit


But may I ask. What more to add here?

It looks quite empty and its just annoying me.

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maybe add a humvee or some vehicle? idk

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Would this car I made a while ago do?


(lol originally for another map)

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Does not look bad. Ill modify it to make a truck and place it
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here.

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Pretty cool! I like this.

Since you made cars too.

I was gonna say barriers but that works just as well if not better

I like the car idea, however I’d space out the vehicles more from each other as it just seems cluttered. I would recommend having a space between the cars, which is half of the length of the car.

Car__Car__Car (This is the view from the side)

Also have a space between them where the doors are, because how would the people enter the driver seat?

Alright thanks ill do it right away after making a helicopter.