Opinion On Forest GFX

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#1

Hello fellow robloxians,
I just finished making my very first GFX and I wanted to ask your opinions on it, and if I could do anything to improve. This piece was inspired by this GFX. GFX feedback - Sickcd GFXs

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#2

honestly for your first GFX its actually not even that bad, but work on the lighting and camera control and youll be set

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#3

For your first GFX, this is very good. I feel like the whole image should be a little bit brighter as its hard to see the background. Another way of fixing this would be to change the background. I like the pose of the character and I can tell you went for a spooky theme. Well done :clap:

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#4

Thank you fro the great feedback! :slight_smile:

#5

Thanks for the feedback! :smile:

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#6

Make the grass and trees more realistic.

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#7

Yeah, I just made it in Roblox and exported it to Blender :sweat_smile:.

#8

Very good for your first gfx, it is very good, it would be better with grass and more realistic trees!

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#9

For your first GFX it’s pretty good.
adding into @instinctgaming123 here are some more things that can be improved.

  • Try adjusting the camera as you can see a bit of face with the background this position looks like it was stuck in the middle if you know what i mean
  • try using spot lights and sun, point lights are really basic and can be used to improve but don’t use them as the only lights
  • Well tbh your posing is pretty good just a 'lil tilt in torso and a lil fill in that leg torso gap and it’s near to perfect.
  • the floor is tilted but the avatar is not so that makes it less realistic.
  • the background is fine just add some grass meshes can be found in toolbox and add them will defiantly look better.
  • the color of the light (Yellowish orange) doesn’t suits the environment try using a lighter shade or white will look a lot better.

I hope you understand i didn’t waste my time criticizing you rather you got some potential and just wanted to help as i got the experience.

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#10

Thanks for the feedback! :smile:

#11

No offense taken thank you for the constructive criticism! :smile:

#12

Yeah, if you don’t have modeling skills then you can take a free tree model from free3d.com and then make your scene.

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#13

Add some textures to the grass and stuff

#14

Thank you I will definitely use this website :smile:

#15

Turbosquid.com is also a good resource but it usually has paid assets (it has some free ones tho).