I love that you’re able to point out details that may prove beneficial to this build. These suggestions really get me motivated, not just from you but everyone else. Thanks to everyone who’ve pointed out things that need improvement!
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You definitely should be motivated! You are obviously a very passionate and incredible builder!
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Lobby looks awesome!
But there does seem to be a bit of open space. I suggest adding things like small bushes, benches, etc.
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The outer-terrain looks super cool! Never seen that done before! Super innovative!
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Thanks! I appreciate your compliments 
I personally think it looks great! The apples on the trees are not needed, though.
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Everything is pretty good, but I would change the transparency to the tunnel a bit, look a bit edgy! I give it a 9/10 Keep it up!
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I don’t understand your point. What is wrong with the apples on the trees?
They are a great stylistic feature and should not at all be removed.
Vis-a-vis trees, the trees in image four are incongruent to the rest of the trees of the map. @TypeByte
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I just think they are not needed, I like a more simplistic building style personally, but that’s just my preference, y’all can do whatever y’all want.
This is an updated version without the apples and changed the tree colours for variation.
It looks very nice and apt! Keep up the good work.
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It looks amazing so far and I’ll try my best to contribute suggestions that haven’t been already said:
These two tree’s styles don’t seem to match:
What I mean:
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One trees branches seem to be made of cylinders and one seems to be made in blender or something.
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Also I’m not sure if you planned this but the two wood on the two trees are different colours.
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One other tip is to play with the lighting to make it seem more cartoonish.
Example: x.com -
In my opinion this rock doesn’t really fit in with the rest of the rocks:
Hope some of these suggestions help you. Congratulations on this awesome build and good luck in future builds.
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I’ll adjust the assets to have a similar style to the rest of the build so it can match more. Thanks for also showing me an example of lighting, i’ll mess around with the lighting to make the build more cartoonish.
Thanks for the suggestions! 
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I’ll adjust the trees to make it fit to the build.
Thanks!
I honestly don’t see why you removed the apples. They were a fresh spark of colour among what is now a dull monochromacy of green.
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I’ve already re-added the apples, I think they add a lot more contrast to the trees, and to not make it look bland.
i LOVE lowpoly builds and just looking at them. They are so nice to see.
The only gripe i have about this is the bridge, too curved. Otherwise I love it!
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Thanks for the compliment!
As others and you suggested, I’ll adjust the bridges curve.
Looks good, but the walls or mountains would look better if it is smooth not flat.
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One thing, I like the trees! It gives off a Paper Mario™ vibe.
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