Give honest feedback
It’s been a while since I’ve made graphic designs, it’s been around a year since I made one
These ones are lightly edited since I didn’t feel like it.
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9/10. I know you didn’t FULLY edit it but maybe work on the clothing a little more when graphic designing so it doesn’t look blurry. Other than that it looks great!
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8/10 Nice work I am bad at GFX to be honest
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I’d give it a 6/10
The first picture the lighting is a bit off and shouldn’t be only lighting up the car, if it spread to the buildings as well it’d add a broader aspect. The gunfire is nice, but texture over top of it looks more grain-like than anything, and the gun should be just a tad higher.
The second is well with the lighting in a way, the arm looks out of place, and the clothing is seems off.
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it’s night time with one street light shining off the car ;-; it fits the story… The guy shoots the guy at a reasonable time which is at night time.
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I like the scene! I feel as if the gun placement according to the hand is a bit low? I presume the muzzle flash is the focus element of the this GFX but I recommend having the characters face in focus as well? It looks great! 
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8/10.
The Only Problem I have with it is the Position with the gun. You could move the gun a little closer to the screen so I gives you that “In Your Face” Effect.
Overall, it’s a good looking GFX! Keep it up!
7-10.
The body parts/shirts look too shiny, the lighting is off and the shirt is very blurry. Other than that, sick GFX!
Did you use Chicago 1949 map here?
Someone told me this before but apparently its not allowed to ask for x/10 anymore but I could be wrong. It looks cool but the gunshot feels of and you need to work on the clothing. Also you should probably watermark your graphic designs because you never know what kind of people are out there.
8/10, nice work! However I think the focus on the first GFX could be changed a little. If a face is included in a GFX (not blank), it should be clear to look at in my opinion. Again it is just subjective though, some may like it the way you designed it which is perfectly fine. 
9/10
The second GFX has a bit of a strange feeling to it. Probably because in one GFX the character has a face and in the other it doesn’t.
Overall pretty solid Graphic design!
5/10. The first GFX is kind of pixelated. The car is just flat and super bright. The gun bullet thing just doesn’t look right to me and the face is also very shiny. For the second GFX the ‘‘Nike’’ logo is VERY pixelated and doesn’t look good at all. Also, the jacket is way too shiny. Overall, it’s pretty great!
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Then it would need less lighting, I’m not really seeing night. Just giving you some honest feedback.
Yeah I know I didn’t put a watermark because this isn’t for anyone, not getting paid at all so it really doesn’t matter if I put it on these ones.
6/10 because in the first picture the car’s material seems a bit off, maybe if you turn it into a metal it will look better. Adding effects makes a lot of difference, as well as some text. Otherwise I think you did great, keep the good work up! 
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Anyways moving on topic. That’s a pretty good gfx. Did you make this in blender?
Also I recommend using PBR materials if you’re going for a realistic look, it will make such a huge difference.
Yeah I made it in blender I lightly edited the gfx. Thanks for telling me that rule, didn’t know.
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It was a free model from the toolbox, everything except for the character model is a free model, didn’t feel like building. I’m lazy I know ;-;
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