Hellooooo guys and gals! About 1 week ago I posted a topic that showed my progress on one of my personal projects called The Mountains well I am happy to announce that IT IS FINALLY AVALABLE TO PLAY!!! you can visit the game using the link provided below or you may go to my profile page and look for the showcase there!!! Also if you want to support me you can donate in the gamepass section any amount helps (Totally optional) without further delay I present to you (Possibly my best creation yet) The Mountains:
I love how you added a waterfall and all that jazz, but I think there are many ways this build can be improved upon.
Starting off with the terrain, you should enable the Decoration mode (found in Terrain under Workspace) to add detailed grass to the build. Also, the mountains are very odd because they are very easy to climb to the top and there isn’t much to look at. Here is an example of why this is so odd:
Here, you can see that it is just one line at the top and then suddenly disappears. I guess you were going with a showcase that is supposed to only look real on one side, but it should still be something you should work on. Here is an empty pocket of water I found, too:
The mountain appears to be almost transparent, which to me doesn’t look realistic at all.
So, yeah, there is clearly a lot of work that needs to be done. I suggest starting off with a base camp in a wintery biome of some sort, then work your way upwards as you make the mountain. Just make sure you cover all the sides of the place, too, because its weird to see a snowy peak then a savannah next to each other.
The mountains are flat on the sides. Also I agree with what @ZurichBT said about the minor problems and the “Is this showcase rushed?”. Try working on it some more.
Also please don’t dislike the game page I understand that some of you may not like it but please just show that on this topic please don’t give the game a dislike
Mine is always set at 10. But, that is besides the point. The main point is that you should spend more time developing this showcase, as it appears to be rushed and not a lot of effort put into some areas.
I understand that you don’t like the dislikes on your games but dislikes are there to determine if the game is good and not. You can’t expect to not get dislikes if your game is open to the public.
Even my games get a lot of dislikes sometimes.
EVERYONE I FIXED THE WEIRD GREEN LIGHTING PLEASE DO NOT DISLIKE THANK YOU I felt like all caps was needed thank you all also REMEMBER TO CHECK OUT THE ICE CAVES peace out
Edit: Looks much better now added more snow and spiced up the lighting!!!
I just checked out the game, and I really like some of the ideas you have implemented such as the waterfalls. Do you plan on adding buildings or anything other than pure terrain? I agree with @ZurichBT as there really isn’t much to see, especially considering it a showcase. But all in all, with more practice and time, there is much that can be improved
I’m going to be completely honest with you, the terrain isn’t the best. I suggest adding a path way of some sort to get up the mountain and adding some texture to the builds like grass or any other decorations. On the other hand, it is an awesome looking place.
