Item: Oldschool Animation Pack
Link to item or Asset ID: Roblox.com/bundles/667
Issue or current text: Party like its 2006…
Recommendation or corrected text: Party like it’s 2006…
2 Likes
All of the Toy Animation Pack items descriptions have a break in the link leading users to the catalog instead of the correct page
Item: Toy Run
Link to item or Asset ID: 973766674
Issue or current text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Catalog - Roblox 973784877/Toy-Animation-Pack
Recommendation or corrected text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Toy Animation Pack - Roblox
Item: Toy Walk
Link to item or Asset ID: 973767371
Issue or current text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Catalog - Roblox 973784877/Toy-Animation-Pack
Recommendation or corrected text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Toy Animation Pack - Roblox
Item: Toy Fall
Link to item or Asset ID: 973768058
Issue or current text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Catalog - Roblox 973784877/Toy-Animation-Pack
Recommendation or corrected text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Toy Animation Pack - Roblox
Item: Toy Jump
Link to item or Asset ID: 973770652
Issue or current text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Catalog - Roblox 973784877/Toy-Animation-Pack
Recommendation or corrected text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Toy Animation Pack - Roblox
Item: Toy Idle
Link to item or Asset ID: 973771666
Issue or current text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Catalog - Roblox 973784877/Toy-Animation-Pack
Recommendation or corrected text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Toy Animation Pack - Roblox
Item: Toy Swim
Link to item or Asset ID: 973772659
Issue or current text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Catalog - Roblox 973784877/Toy-Animation-Pack
Recommendation or corrected text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Toy Animation Pack - Roblox
Item: Toy Climb
Link to item or Asset ID: 973773170
Issue or current text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Catalog - Roblox 973784877/Toy-Animation-Pack
Recommendation or corrected text:
Part of the Toy Animation Package Toy Animation Pack - Roblox
Item: Tiger’s Eye Eye
Link to item or Asset ID:
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/131917625/Tigers-Eye-Eye
Issue or current text: I feel like it isn’t necessary to state the word eye twice for the name of this item.
Recommendation or corrected text: Tiger’s Eye or Tiger Eye
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Item: Fake C4
Link to item or Asset ID: Fake C4 - Roblox
Issue or current text: Tick tick tick…this one’s a dud! Prank your friends with
this fake C4.
Recommendation or corrected text: Tick tick tick… this one’s a dud! Prank your friends with this fake C4.
Add a space after the ‘…’ & don’t place “this fake C4” away from the rest of the description’s text.
Item: Battle Bottle
Link to item or Asset ID: Battle Bottle - Roblox
Issue or current text: This bottle is half full…of explosives.
Recommendation or corrected text: This bottle is half full… of explosives.
Add a space after the ‘…’
Item: Sinister F
Link to item or Asset ID: Sinister F - Roblox
Issue or current text: Sinister F
Recommendation or corrected text: Sinister F.
A full stop should be added after the F in the name to be in line with the item’s series.
Links:
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/2506365681/Galactic-Ghost
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/4041573428/Undead-Leifs-Zombie-Beard
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/1117747196/Vampires-Top-Hat
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/5773219190/Classic-Witch-Head
Issue:
*LIMITED TIME ONLY (Oct. 23 - Nov. 2): Bring out your avatar’s inner monster this Halloween. *
In October, these were all released with the description that they would be taken off sale after a few days. However, since then, the description has been changed and the items are still on sale. I bought these items under the pretense that they would be limited edition*, not available for everyone forever.
*In this case, just off-sale after the date, not necessarily Limited or LimitedU.
Proposed Solution
Take the above four items off sale.
Item: Savannah Cat Head
Link to item or Asset ID: Savannah Cat Head - Wonder Woman - Roblox
Issue or current text: Item in the icon is not properly centered
Recommendation or corrected text: Shift the item so it’s centered on the icon
Posting this mesh error here because I followed @ givenothingback’s steps and submitted a support ticket, but only received a stupid response which wasn’t even remotely related to the issue.
So basically, my issue is that a hat called “Chessboard” has some kind of error or something with the mesh which makes a piece misaligned with the body of the chess piece.
See here: https://gyazo.com/c6cac187e85f76e9dead2ce20e0ce80b
Item: Chessboard
Link to item or Asset ID: Chessboard - Roblox
Issue or current text: Error in mesh
Recommendation or corrected text: Fix it?
Item: Goldlika:Champion
Link to item or Asset ID: Goldlika:Champion - Roblox
Issue or current text: Goldlika:Champion
Recommendation or corrected text: Goldlika: Champion
A space should be placed after the colon to be in line with the item’s series, it’s also grammatically incorrect.
Item: The Bull Moose Vengence
Link to item or Asset ID: The Bull Moose Vengence - Roblox
Issue or current text: The Bull Moose Vengence
Recommendation or corrected text:** The Bull Moose Vengeance
‘Vengeance’ is spelt incorrectly in the item’s name.
Item: 1984 Fanny Pack
Link to item or Asset ID: 1984 Fanny Pack - Wonder Woman - Roblox
Issue or current text: The height of fashion in the 80’s…and today.
Recommendation or corrected text: The height of fashion in the '80s…and today.
Change 80’s to '80s since the apostrophe is unnecessary and does not indicate possession, the s at the end of '80s already serves as a plural of the decade.
Item: Paint Bucket Rut Roh
Link to Item or Asset: Paint Bucket Rut Roh - Roblox
Issue or current text: Now I get why you didn’t keep that summer job for long…lol
Recommendation or corrected text: Now I get why you didn’t keep that summer job for long… lol
Item: A Life Aquatic
Link to Item or Asset: A Life Aquatic - Roblox
Issue or current text: The description uses a copyrighted gun name, “Glock”. Description: “Anne-Marie, do all the interns get Glocks? No. They have to share one.”
Recommendation or corrected text: Anne-Marie, do all the interns get handguns? No. They have to share one.
Item: Disgraced Baroness of the Federation
Link to item or Asset ID: Disgraced Baroness of the Federation - Roblox
Issue or current text: The War of Reunification have seen you exiled. The Federation is whole once more, but not for you. All of creation turns its eyes away from you.
Recommendation or corrected text: The Wars of Reunification have seen you exiled. The Federation is whole once more, but not for you. All of creation turns its eyes away from you.
Change ‘war’ to ‘wars’ to be in-line with this item’s series, it also doesn’t make sense to use ‘have’ after the singular of war, that should be ‘has’ if you stick with ‘war’.
Item: Hobgoblin
Link to Item or Asset: Hobgoblin - Roblox
Issue or current text: You don’t want to run into him in a dark forest late at night… or anywhere really.
Recommendation or corrected text: You don’t want to run into something like this in a dark forest at night… or anywhere really.
Item: Disgraced Baron of the Federation
Link to item or Asset ID: Disgraced Baron of the Federation - Roblox
Issue or current text: The War of Reunification have seen you exiled. The Federation is whole once more, but not for you. All of creation shuns you.
Recommendation or corrected text: The Wars of Reunification have seen you exiled. The Federation is whole once more, but not for you. All of creation shuns you.
Change ‘war’ to ‘wars’ to be in-line with this item’s series, it also doesn’t make sense to use ‘have’ after the singular of war, that should be ‘has’ if you stick with ‘war’.
Item: Countess of the Federation
Link to item or Asset ID: Countess of the Federation - Roblox
Issue or current text: The wars of re-unification are complete. The federation is whole once more. Most of creation is yours.
Recommendation or corrected text: The Wars of Reunification are complete. The Federation is whole once more. Most of creation is yours.
Reunification is spelt wrong & certain words should be capitalised to be in-line with this item’s series.
Item: Duke of the Fallen Federation
Link to item or Asset ID: Duke of the Fallen Federation - Roblox
Issue or current text: The War of Reunification have driven you to ruin. While the Federation is whole once more, you cling to a rebellion, hoping all of creation will be yours again…someday.
Recommendation or corrected text: The Wars of Reunification have driven you to ruin. While the Federation is whole once more, you cling to a rebellion, hoping all of creation will be yours again… someday.
Change ‘war’ to ‘wars’ to be in-line with this item’s series, it also doesn’t make sense to use ‘have’ after the singular of war, that should be ‘has’ if you stick with ‘war’. There should also be a space after the ellipsis.
I’m actually going to go through some assets and finding some stuff so instead of submitting multiple replies I’ll just make this big one.
Item: Redcliff Cloak
Link to Item or Asset: (2) Redcliff Cloak - Roblox
Issue or corrected text: From the front, he looks like any other traveling villager. Those who see the logo know he is a brave warrior traveling to help all people from certain destruction.
Recommendation or corrected text: From the front, you’ll look like any other traveling villager. Those who see the logo know you are a brave warrior traveling to help all people from certain destruction.
Change “He” to “They” as anyone can wear this hood, it’s not specific to a gender.
Item: Redcliff Wall Smasher
Link to Item or Asset: (2) Redcliff Wall Smasher - Roblox
Issue or corrected text: No cities’ walls are strong enough to stop him. He will make way for his army to invade the city, and there is very little you can do to stop him.
Recommendation or corrected text: No cities’ walls are strong enough to stop you. You will make way for your army to invade the city, and there is very little people can do to stop you.
Change “He” to “you” or “Your” as done above.
Item: Redcliff Courage Bearer
Link to Item or Asset (2) Redcliff Courage Bearer - Roblox
Issue or current text: His position is largely honorary, but it is still important. After all, without the courage to drive into battle, how would anything be accomplished?
Recommendation or corrected text: Your position is largely honorary, but it is still important. After all, without the courage to drive into battle, how would anything be accomplished?
Change “His” to “Your”
Item: Paladin of the Splintered Skies
Link to Item or Asset (2) Paladin of the Splintered Skies - Roblox
Issue or current text: Is there one who is more renowned for his bravery than this man? If so, I should like to meet him.
Recommendation or corrected text: Is there one who is more renowned for their bravery than this person? If so, I should like to meet them.
Correct Male terms to Multi-Gender terms (he/him to their/person/them)
Item: Steadfast General
Link to Item or Asset (2) Steadfast General - Roblox
Issue or current text: He won’t lose a single man in this battle. His life depends on it.
Recommendation or corrected text: You won’t lose a single soul in this battle. Your life depends on it.
Use Multi-Gender Terms.
Item: Corinthian Guard
Link to Item or Asset (2) Corinthian Guard - Roblox
Issue or current text: All honor and glory is his to gain or lose.
Recommendation or corrected text: All honor and glory is yours to gain or lose.
not going to add this anymore, you know what im targeting at by now
Item: Roman Warrior
Link to Item or Asset (2) Roman Warrior - Roblox
Issue or current text: The best revenge is to be unlike him who performed the injury.
Recommendation or corrected text: The best revenge is to be unlike you who performed the injury.
Item: The Emperor’s Champion
Link to Item or Asset (2) The Emperor’s Champion - Roblox
Issue or current text: He’ll defend the mighty Emperor until the very end!
Recommendation or corrected text: You’ll defend the mighty Emperor until the very end!
Item: The Darkest Gladiator
Link to Item or Asset (2) The Darkest Gladiator - Roblox
Issue or current text: He fought the lion… and won!
Recommendation or corrected text: You fought the lion… and won!