I just want some feedback on my most recent GFX work, please be honest and harsh as I want to improve as much as I can!
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Is that Obi-Wan Kenobi vs Anakin Skywalker?
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This looks…
A M A Z I N G
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but there should be an effect where the lightsabers are clashing together.
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yessir, battle of the heroes recreated in roblox GFX
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It looks good, but I feel like the Posting is a little odd. I feel like they should be tilted or something, as it feels a little plain.
The effects are also really good, along with the shading.
Good job!
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howso do you mean? please expand on this : )
my friend had the same to say, I shall find a better posing/angling for them to make it seem they are more deep in combat
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There should be a little particle effect where the lightsabers are colliding.
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It looks like there already is one, but yeah, he should make it a bit more visible
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I originally tried to add sparks but they didn’t work, so I just added the camera glare, but I shall try to add more to it
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Looks awesome. How long did it take you?
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From start to finish technically 1 year 4 months because I started it then left it for ages, but actually working on this one it came out to about 3 hours including render time and post production (photoshop stuff ect)
Here is what it looked like from 1 year 4 months ago when I first tried to make it, definite improvement
Pretty cool!
My only concerns are that the particles are a bit overdone to the point where they look chunky and fake. I would also add shadows to your characters, helps a lot in improving the GFX.
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howso add shadows? I created a full environment recreating Mustafar from star wars with a HDRI I created to mimic the sky of the lava planet, the shadows are as accurate as my pc would be able to handle
particles look too much like overlay, there should be particles at the saber clash, and i just want to know why are they not swinging their sabers hard they are like touching it slightly, and the posing is too relaxed not intense like fight
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I agree their stances are not posed enough and it looks as if they are relaxed and not within a fight and I am working on that, however can you elaborate on what you said about the particles?
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Also can you elaborate on what you said about the particles?
the orange particles really clash, but that is fine if you add blue particles from lightsaber mixed in and also have them be more near the face and on the face too so it shows that they are in the scene
and there should be particles where the light saber touches blue ones
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I shall add particles to the saber clash definitely, but the particles around are separate from the clash, they are the lava spews of Mustafar that are shown during the final battle of Episode 3, howso do they clash?
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