I am currently working on maps which i can sell later on but just started a map which is gonna be a big main project the pics below are what ive done in 10 min and its only a TINY section of what the map will be pls give critics but remember everything isnt your mind
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I feel like the trees could use more detail. I can’t wait to see the final product!
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Thx i will keep that in mind for sure i will defintly take that in
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On the contrary, I feel the trees have too much detail due to the blocky terrain that they are set in. I would suggest making simpler trees with a more blocky feel or possibly adding more depth to the terrain itself to match it. Otherwise, good job and I’m sure the final product will be great.
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Thx i will take that in again FOR SURE i need all the support i can get
For only 10 minutes work, you’ve done a great job at developing a theme and aesthetic for the build. I particularly like the build’s colour palette and the use of the plastic material throughout.
To elaborate on the materials, I feel as though the sand material at the bottom of the waterfall doesn’t fit well with the rest of the build because it appears to be the only area that uses a material other than the plastic material.
As you continue to work on the build, I think it would also be nice if you were to add a small pond or river at the bottom of the waterfall for the water to flow into naturally. At the moment, the square body of water doesn’t match quite match the rocky barrier up above.
Other than that, the build seems to be coming together quite nicely!
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Im actually currently working on the water fall and i didnt know what to do with it but you have given me a great idea so thank you
Yeah it would be best if you didn’t use free model trees personally I’d just open up blender and look a YT Tutorial.
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The trees are temporary i will probably be using blender soon but right now im not focused on that
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There isn’t much to give feedback on. With the images provided all I can say is to have more of a variety of shapes and sizes for the trees as no tree is the same in real life. Maybe you could add some splashes at the bottom of the waterfall to give the waterfall a bit more life.
This is a note to everyone. Please make sure, when you are asking for feedback, to have a reasonable quantity of your build made and not just a tiny unfinished section. Having a better quantity of your build made will bring in better, more thought out feedback because people will have more to give feedback on. This isn’t aimed at anyone but it is more general advise.
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First i want feed back on the first part of the build so i can add it to make it better and second i have added splashes to the water fall currently working on a river
and before you say oh only show when its nearly done no i need feed back
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I really like your style, cartoonish and still, almost, blocky. I think it’s creative, but personally I’d recommend using all the space to add more details, such as bushes, other types of trees, or maybe a well? Anyways, good luck on your project!
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The updated waterfall looks very nice. However, it would look even better if the basin of the waterfall wasn’t as flat and straight as it looks now. You could either make it more curved or keep it rectangular but make the breadth parallel to where the waterfall ends.
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Overall it looks good and as stated above include a pond that flows into a stream.
However, for the waterfall there is a break and that is not consistent.
I also suggest playing with the lighting to make it more realistic and have the sun facing towards the mountain, since it looks dark right now due to the shadows.
Hope this helps! 
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Thanks i am defintly going to work on that
It looks great for the time spent on it! However, I would suggest utilizing more materials to make it less plasticy.
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Right now i want it to look plasticy as thats what im best at but thx for the suggestion
Just like he said, he needs feedback first. How can you get ideas and ratings without requesting feedback? After he added all the ideas and got all the feedback he will probably release the full game.
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