Thoughts on Showcase

Hello! Im Domderp999, professional builder. I have finished my first showcase, called, Sint’s Island. Its basic, but I need thoughts! Tell me what you think in the reply area.

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It looks nice. I would recommend setting the flowers to CanCollide = false, but other than that, it looks very realistic.

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The little red tent thing is also floating so maybe move it down slightly. It always makes me triggered when something in a game is floating.

Hey there! Great use of meshes of rocks 'n trees & that thing which I’ve no idea what you call but you go under.

In addition to the suggestion above, I’d say try playing around with the lighting 'n stuff, maybe use some pointlights if necessary to get a clearer view of what’s going on here.

All the best,
Jack

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Looks good, but the red tenting thing is above the ground a weebit, I’d reccomend setting it down on a nice flat surface or just extending the poles.

Great example of terrain combined with building, for the most part

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try adding lighting to the dark parts the rest is a good job.

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The tower is simply about 4 cylinders, there is a tree that is sideways and the tent thing is from the BrushTool plugin.

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This looks pretty good and realistic. The only thing I notice is that the lighting under the trees is very bad, and you should improve them.

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That looks so good! I always like those builders that try to make realistic games, overall, I am glad that Roblox had done such a big improvement making it’s platform better and interesting.