Hiya! I just completed this build for a friend. Please suggest any improvements and such, and ways I could improve on this. The build theme was a modern and clean style, and very “simple” as such.
Note: I wasn’t paid much, which is why the furniture is much the same. I also didn’t get much as reference, and went off of what I felt would look nice. Machines still need adding, too.
Thanks!
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If this was a stand-alone build, it is impressive. It is aesthetically pleasing to the eye and there’s a good variety of materials and colours. However, the only problem is that, due to the massive amount of cafes out there now, it’s getting repetitive and boring. I would suggest adding something specific to the cafe group or to you to make it unique out of so many others.
I love this, I really love the way you’ve made it into a cartoonish theme. I really like the idea of the layout, and the decorations.
I do think it would be nice to add some more decorations on the outside, you could maybe try and hire a modeler or make some low poly mountains and a variety of different trees. You could also make a mini VIP lounge.
Other than that, it looks like a great build, I am impressed keep succeeding never give up my friend.
I totally agree. Every cafe and hotel I visit nowadays are much the same, and it is quite hard to find one that is unique. Unfortunately the person that hired me gave me nothing to work with other than “Blue and red color palette” which made this project particularly tricky. I will make sure to include some more unique elements next time, though!
Thank you! There is a small Premium lounge on the second floor, and if the client agrees with it, I will most definitely try hire a modeler.
Hello there,
the building looks nice and my eye is too bright because of the magnificent building you have made. the interior of the building is really nice and well made. but I was wondering… what do you gonna do with extra space outside of the building?
however, the counter was really good and also it looks at your counter good position and also perfect arrangement and the second floor it also looks fantastic not only you can see people beneath you but also you can view the outside of the restaurant or I will say cafe.
I think that all for now and I will see you in the next reply…
Seeya!
If you can do something better than most cafes, then I’d say this was amazing.
What is the difference between a normal cafe and your cafe?
Thank you for the feedback. I am still awaiting a reply from the client on what he wants outside. I have added a dock, and I am planning on adding a separate, much smaller build outside that will have some seating. Maybe a fire pit, not sure yet.
Yeah, that is an issue I struggle with. I build with a modern style, and unfortunately most cafes seem to be like that. I will speak to the client once again to see if he wants to add anything that will make it unique.
What about Bakiez? The cafe is modern too. I’d suggest making pools or something like that, or expanding on your menu, or different languages in your game.
I am unsure of what the client wants to do, as I am really only the builder. I can alter it to his preference if needed. He is still undecided on the menu, but I will be suggesting some things to him that will make this stand out from the other cafes.
I like the overall design of the place, it really has a nice feel to the place, however, I feel like there is a lot more you could add to the ceiling as it looks rather empty, as by looking there’s only hanging lights on one side but the other side empty I think you wanted the cafe to look like that so I don’t bother.
If the cafe is finished, I would suggest detailing it up a bit by adding the decorations, as by looking at the image the walls are pretty empty I do believe you could add add some cafe signs posters, pictures ect. However, I think that another thing that you should try to work on is dealing the ceiling a bit more. Or try looking at existing cafes and see how they add decorations to the walls, and ceiling.
The design looks great I would recommend to add the final details to the cafe such as the, chairs, tables, and more in the front of the cafe or around it so it could have the full resemblance of a Cafe. There isn’t much to say you did an amazing job with the layout and design hope to see what else you plan on adding to the cafe.
This looks amazing. What would be cool is if you built other things around it and almost made like a little city with this style you have here. Very nice work!
Thank you for the feedback! I will be sure to include these in the final product. Like i said, I am still unsure on what the client wants to do with it. I would need to speak with him before I make further changes. I agree with the ceiling, although I am not sure what to add. I might try to experiment with other lighting and such.
I love the way you made it, every thing is perfect. Just one thing, it looks like every cafe in roblox and I would recommend changing it up a bit just so your cafe has a different ring to it. You know what I mean? Otherwise the build is perfect!
That’s pretty much what I noticed right off the bat- this cafe looks pretty similar to a bunch of other cafes that groups use. Maybe have it underwater or in outer-space or in the shape of a star. A different setting or style can make all the difference.
Overall, it’s a great build, I can see the effort put into this, incredible job, there’s just nothing more to it than that, if I were you, I’d definitely put in more scenery to surround the cafe.
I like that kind of cafe! But I suggest you to change the floor behind the counter/kitchen maybe as white tile floors.
I like it but the whole game is from the toolbox.
