Hello developers! once again im back from taking a small break from dev forum with a topic of feed back for my first banner. I have already had experience with gfx making and I mean a lot but I really didnt do any banners previously. anyways here it is and huge shoutout to darkestradient who hired me to do this.
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I like it, but you maybe could have done a different background and not just the dog head and maybe remove the white outlines and put some stuff in the right places, but over all it’s nice.
Very good. Though I do recommend for banners like this to use a link shortener. Nobody wants to type in those long urls.
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Yeah i told him that but he told me to keep it simple, thanks for the feedback anyways!
thanks ill consider it for the next time!
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It’s good. I suggest using a Rig, though, as it makes the Arms less Blocky, and looks better; below is a Block Rig which I use very often, easy to use.
PaintRigV3.blend (801.4 KB)
I also thing the lighting is a bit bright, and textures could be edited and messed with, but this is all constructive criticism, it’s still good.
AridOats. 
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thank you! and ill check the program out, if it can make it look better ill take it 
Oh, you didn’t use Blender? That is something unique! Check out the Link below for Information on Downloads etc., and then the Link below that for using the Rig. It’s alright to make GFX in Roblox Studio, but it’s better to create them in Blender. AND Blender is free (not saying its easy!).
AridOats.
The players look good but the doge in the middle looks copied and pasted from the catalog preview just with an outline added. I would use a different font that isn’t Arial for the links to your social (something like Inter, Lato or Roboto is a lot better to see).
Oh, i did use blender to give it some lightning and life to it, im actually very experienced with modeling and im currently doing a showcase with realism.
Also I should mention that the background looks basic and you could do a lot better. I do agree with one of the posts above that recommend shortlinks, you can use bit.ly or tinyurl.com links instead. If you want to customise it further, look at firebase.google.com and create a new project and look at the Dynamic Links section, I’ve created a couple of custom shortlinks (https://giyt.page.link and https://rblx.page.link). I’ve left an example of one of my custom shortlinks leading to my YouTube channel (should mention its case sensitive). https://giyt.page.link/Subscribe
Good luck in the future @Adolof
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thanks! ill complement this post with the other one.
This is probably the only thing I don’t like
Your text is too small and you demonstrate no color theory, specifically cmyk
I suggest changing the background and text, but great work!