What do you think of my first showcase game?

Hello there ! I’ve been working on this showcase game for a few days and I’d really appreciate some feedback and thoughts/opinions on it ! I’ve been developing on ROBLOX for around 4 months but I’m mostly good at building so I decided to make my first showcase which takes place in a magical world in the sky and in this place there is a Lighthouse very much known as “The Magical Sky Lighthouse” [for some reason the game thumbnail won’t upload]

here’s the game link : • Sky Lighthouse ☁️ - Roblox

here are some in-game images :

here’s what the thumbnail is supposed to look like (don’t know why is it taking so long to upload)

Thank you for your time !

Recommended to play on max graphics and have volume on !

[all models are mine except the grass since I made it through a plugin , the rocks , “icicles” and trees are made by me in blender software]

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Love everything about it. Keep up the work and go deeper into showcases, I would like to see more :slight_smile:

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Thank you for the feedback ! Well I am not planning to make anymore showcases as for now I got into learning how to script cause one day I wanna end up as a solo Dev. But maybe somewhere in the future I will ! Thank you again ! Much appreciated !

I can teach you alot if you add me on discord, direct message me.

Nah I’m good , thanks for the offer tho ! I’m learning everything by myself , watching tutorials looking at free models trying to make my own scripts etc .

That looks awesome, sir. It’s super clean, interesting and there’s lots to look at. Keep it up and have a good day.

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Try not to watch tutorials, they really don’t help, go through roblox dev hub, the dev forums, or stack overflow.

Thank you ! Much appreciated !

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Sometimes tutorials actually help ngl. Like roblox youtubers like “AlvinBlox”, “SheaNorse”, “Eppobot” made actually useful tutorials. I learned some scripting and modeling from them.

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I started scripting 3 days ago simply by looking at how to make a killbrick and I ended up making doors and color changing bricks , moving platforms , spinners and stuff like that . So yeah tutorials do help sometimes ,I currently watch TheDevKing .

Oh yeah! Even I watch TheDevKing. He makes very useful tutorials that I used many times to make things.

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Wow… That looks very good! Showcases like this can really get you hired from many groups. If you keep up and keep learning & getting better, maybe one day you might actually get millions of people visiting your showcases. (I should’ve said this first before replying on the tutorials topic lol)

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Woah thank you !! I mean I’m building for only around 4 months I’m not that experienced but you know … I have a passion for it . For now I’m giving a big break to building putting all my time in learning how to script cause I wanna be a solo developer . But thank you so much !

4 months??? Bruh when I was 4 months into developing games I wasn’t even that good xd.

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Well I put like 2-3 hours a day into it so yeah lol . Practice makes perfect !

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I really like looking at showcase games. And I gotta say, that is pretty well made. Great job :+1:

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I LOVE your game and the graphics! Keep up the good work! c:
-Chunky

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Thank you very much ! Really appreciated !

Thank you so much !! Really appreciated ! :smiley:

This game is very nice! I like the choice of colors and music, it gives it a cold, but cozy feel. (i think thats a feeling right) Its a solid showcase game, keep up the good work man! :smile:


p.s: i like the lighting alot, it makes the game pop more

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