What do you think of my gui?

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#1

So, I’ve been spending a few days working on a game/gui that sells clothing. Its based off of Amazon, and how it automatically updates when new things are added, removed, or sold!

A lot of functionality doesn’t work, like the “View all” buttons and the search bar, but I plan on adding more when I can.
It uses @TheNexusAvenger’s Module3D and Roblox proxies to make it all work!

Screenshots (Original)

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Screenshots (Update 1)

I added more color, fixed the text issue, etc.

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Videos (Update 2)

PC Version
Mobile Version

Summary

The game is here: [BETA] infazon - Roblox
Theres no thumbnail as of right now, just a icon.

I know its basic, thats why I wanted your feedback! Tell me what needs work (aside of scripting) and what you might like!

Also, I was inspired by @Homemade_Meal’s “Cornucopia [UGC Store]” and obviously the Amazon website. :slight_smile:

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#2

Try capitalizing all the letters at the bottom of the shirts. Also, make room on top of the shirt decals, as the text looks too close and weird compared to the GUI on the shirts. For the “View All”, make it in the middle of that button, so it is perfectly alined with the photo. Remove the outlines of the text that says “Purchase”. Also, replace the Purchase button’s grey color too a green color that fits in with the grey frame. For the “back” button in Screenshot 2, expand the text a bit.

#3

It’s quite plain, and the grey doesn’t express a very upbeat mood.
Ignore my old comment on the text.

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#4

Ah, thats the name of the games. The games actually have that in the actually name, I didn’t like it when it was changed, because it sounded too serious.

#5

I’m going for a modern style. Also, maybe i’ll use cartoony for a few things - oh nvm then

#6

Did you make this using only roblox inbuilt tools bc I use a pretty bad external software though my GUI’s turn out pretty nice and not blocky I suggest using more fonts and playin with color sorta like this 2 minute UI made by me

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#7

Please change the color of the word infazon to all black.

#8

I like my guis to scale nicely, so people with square monitors can see my uis nicely, using an image would require for the ui to be square and it wouldnt fit for most montiors.

I think i’ll look around to see what variation of colors I can add.

#9

Looks good, but it lacks flair, and the words don’t fit inside the labels.

#10

I feel these GUIs are basic I feel there could be more pop and less bland

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#11

It doesn’t matter weather the monitor is square or not as a UI designer you want your players to really be drawn to the UI it has to look friendly yours’s just looks blocky and unwelcoming (No offense) I suggest using roundify a plugin that smooths out the corners on UI really helps

#12

I used roundify to make it less blocky.

Its just very faint.

I honestly should have used UI corners but its a bit too late haha

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#14

well, that was a bit… rude, but alright. totally didnt spend like 3 days on this

The overlapping gui is a mistake by me, it will be fixed in the new screenshots I will upload in a minute or two.

I don’t think people will want to buy a word. You didn’t even put a picture of a katana, just the word.

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#15

I don’t think everyone works with that mindset.
Probably not a lot of people, actually

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#16

There is going to be a viewport frame there and if I hurt you in any way I am sorry that was not my intention at all I will withdraw my post

#17

Yeah, usually people just care for the clothing.

I’m trying to make my ui as nice as I can so people know that I do put effort into my things.

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#18

I have updated the post with new ss. Please tell me what you think about the new UI.

and yes i did base it off the “mint” brickcolor :3

#19

Kinda looks the same with a different background. What did you change in it?

#20

Moved a few things over, fixed the issue where the text overflows, made some text a different font, and most obviously added color since that was the thing that most people were criticizing about

Also added the old robux icon so it makes more sense that you have to purchase things with robux.

make sure you open the Update 1 screenshots lol

#21

OH. now that i actually looked at it, it looks good in my opinion. great job.

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