Worn apartment hallway [FEEDBACK+NEED IDEAS]

Hey guys so I’m working on this hallway part of a bigger showcase

If you want to see the full post regarding the game I’ll link it here: Shabby Alley [SHOWCASE]

Screenshot

Old screenshots

I’m looking for feedback and ideas/inspiration for what I should add next, don’t know if I should leave this as is or move onto building the actual apartment room

Feel free to drop reference pictures for ideas!

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Hey I think it would be super cool if you added some old posters or pictures to the wall that have that worn look to them, great build keep up the great work!

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Some crappy old plumbing pipes that are rusty or old Air Conditioning units or a dirty welcome mat in front of the doors would be nice details to potentially add. :octopus:

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It looks like something old and abandoned I would love you to add damaged and discolored doors to make it look scary. Good job

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Thanks for the suggestions guys I like em

Updated the post with most recent screenshot

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Looks stunning! One thing I would add is one of the light to flicker (if possible) as it would add to the vibe of an old hallway. Anyhow, good work on it :+1:

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put some old looking poster and also some perfect sound for the showcase

i hope this is helping you :ok_hand:

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It looks great! You should try making the ceiling lights swing to add that extra creepy effect to it. Otherwise, keep up the great work!

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Well my opinion on this is the hallway look good for first time looking at this picture i think about asylum but what about ideas i think you can make light blinking or add pot with flower in the hallway

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I really like this build! I had say that’s spooky place which you can rarely see in any Roblox games and I appreciate this!

  • I recommend changing the lights and making them a little smoother, I meant these decals coming off the lights. The place where it touches floor doesn’t look that great and I hope, you can make it a little bit better.

  • You may add a spooky window right on the left wall.

  • Some cracks on the walls would add a small effect to this spooky place.

  • Some more details for the doors because these look kind of boring at the moment, bu details will make them a lot better!

Overall, I’d say that the showcase is great, I visited the game and I loved the outside look, lovely!

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By better lighting, I meant something like this. As you can see, it is a lot smoother.

An Example

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How do you get your light rays to look like that? Looks amazing

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Looks great, I have nothing negative to say about it. Although I’d possibly add something to the walls? Maybe try adding some decorations on the walls and see how it looks!

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Hey! This looks really cool! Amazing use of textures and I love the beam effect coming from the light!

Maybe work on a better carpet I woul say.

Amazing work and good luck on making the rest!

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For the light I used a cone mesh, a beam effect (that’s whats clipping through the ground) and light ray decals

Thank you all for the feedback and ideas, I’ll update the post with the most recent image once its polished

Hi,
I really do love the eerie scene and atmosphere this simple hallway has given.
I would say the only thing to improve on it is to possible make the lights flicker, although this is a screen shot and i don’t know if it flickers but i think that would help as well has some flies or insects maybe some webs around the hallway.
Great Build altogether.
Keep Building.

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Updated the post once again with the most recent screenshot just some color changed and added more textures to some parts that needed to be fleshed out more (also fixed the beam effect warping into the ground)

I think I’m ready to move onto the apartment room build and revisit this once I feel the need to swap out the doors + add extra details

This is simply stunning, however if it were me I would tone down the light beam a tiny tad.

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Looking fantastic, good job listening to the community great work!

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Look real good but some bits look a bit plain. Maybe add some stains, rips and papers to the floor. Put numbers on the doors. Make some of the paint ripping off of the wall and that all i can come up with. Keep up the good work.

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