[Edited logo a bit] Feedback on my logo #4

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#1

Hello everyone

After over a year, I have finally created another logo.

This logo is for my game Prison World.

I would like to see your feedback.

Logos

Original (Image 1):

EXAMPLE

I edited it a bit to make this (Image 2):
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Tell me the one you like better in your reply please.

This logo will be used in a intro screen. And was made in Adobe Photoshop

Previous posts:

Feedback on my Logo #5
#2

“A single shape and a color can say more than a thousand words.”

Nice overall, but think about mobile users for example. They won’t be able to see that text clearly.

#3

How would I exactly make the text more clear for mobile users?
Also for some more context this logo will be used in a intro screen.

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#4

If the logo will be used in-game, then I have no problem with that.

Also, I am not a designer, so don’t take my advice.

#5

The inline for the text is a bit weird but overall decent.