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#1

Hello! Please provide feedback on this cafe I made. (It took me about 50 mins, and it’s not done.

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I put a sign that does NOT fit right in the middle of where you order, so I should resize that.

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I decided to put water all around it, because I wanted to be the cafe that people focus on. But, should I delete the water and add activities that people could do? (Outdoor.)

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I weirdly decided to use glass for the walls, how does it look?

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When you spawn, you spawn kinda in a weird place. Should I change this?

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I added a little outdoor area, I will add some things here. Should I change it to sand, or does grass look good?

I would love feedback. Thanks!!! :heavy_heart_exclamation:

EDIT: I added some more images.

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#2

Hi hihihdqwdhi,

I would go for your cafe on an island, it will make the cafe look better and also more realistic.
Since you are a clothing designer, you could also add a building with your own Cookie Cafe Merchandise.

Good luck!
Sven

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Is glass good for cafe walls?
#3

Oh, I did not think of that! Thanks for the advice, Sven!

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#4

Looks little bit odd, not great honestly.

If you looked at other cafes, this is far from those and does not even look like a cafe. I’d advice to make a lobby first which leads to the cafe. Cafe having it’s windows, a nice welcoming door and etc. Also having a sort of beach type theme around the map could give it a little bit glow.

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#5

Ok, thanks! I will work on that! I’m trying to make it like a mini cafe, that’s pretty small! :smiley:

#6

Bad wood grain use a texture for the flooring

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#7

Uh, can you tell me what you mean in detail…?

#8

I think he means instead of the normal wood texture use another texture from the toolbox

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#9

Ah, okay! :smiley: Thanks for telling me! <3

#10

I love it!

Expand it a bit, make the windows smaller and add barriers in between. Use some textures! Make the island terrain rather than a block

Great job!

#11

@EpicTradings Ah, thank you! I will do that, also, I just posted something new, about a different cafe I made!

I would love your feedback! :slight_smile: :heavy_heart_exclamation:

LINK: Built a Cafe for my friend! - #5 by hihihdqwdhi

#12

Can you send a photo? Playing a game just doesn’t work for me to judge something.

#13

It’s a nice start but here are some ideas you can do.

  1. Hide the spawn or make the transparency to 9.
  2. Make the sign thinner and smaller, as it is sticking out.
  3. Make it an island with palm trees. and sand.