FeedBack on dining room

Hello! I am currently making a FNAF game, (Five Nights At cool boy’s) and I would like some feedback on the dining room.

Please take note:
-The red thing around the tables will be removed, it was used for measuring.
-I will add some menus on the tables as to replicate RL restaurants.
-I will add posters too.

Here’s some posters to get a general idea of the theme.

Should I add:
Poster like words saying « Celebrate! » « Party » « cool » « epic ».
Details on the walls like a line like in this model:

image

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Game (Not public yet)

https://www.roblox.com/games/6349932370/Five-Nights-At-cool-boys-DEMO

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Maybe some sort of darkness instead of it being so bright in the camera’s using fog and some exposure compensation. And the smooth plastic doesn’t fit in with the feel of a “fnaf” game

Either way the models are nice

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I would also like feedback on some ads if you wouldn’t mind. Feedback on ads

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The dining room looks great, but will the game have a story?

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Looks great! The only change I would make is fewer lights.

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It will have a story, right now it’s the first game.

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I will make the game public for a short amount of time in this week. I’ll make a post asking for feedback.

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Here’s an updated version:

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Wednesday I will make the game public temporarily.

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It looks really cool but should the game be at around midnigh? its cool but it needs to be dark(pretty dark) and some kind of abandoned corroded feel to it. The grey and white colors are really mixed together. Try experimenting with different shades and colors to make it more spooky-ish. Also try to use meshes too to make the props more sharper and precise.

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I appreciate the feedback.

Here’s what the game’s atmosphere will be:

A bit spooky with humor,

So for example if you get jumpscare, you’ll jump and laugh after.

And I’m trying to make modern day restaurants.

It is true that I should add more colors.

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I recently made a new post in which my game is now public.

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