The overall design is actually very good however I would consider added actual letters for the title of the cafe and for the motel and make it look nice with a background part like you did there just with real text. There are plugins such as https://www.roblox.com/library/359826082/3D-Text-Maker which allow you to make text easily so I would recommend either that or maybe import something. The rest of the build is very good and I admire your building taste.
Your design is good but the color scheme is peculiar, the building itself is grey and I wouldn’t expect vibrant colors like red/blue/yellow to match. Also the decals are unappealing, maybe change it or make it from parts.
The build is okay but it definitely needs more improvement.
You should make the second floor higher as the windows looked like it’s being squeezed.
Add detail to the roof.
Example of Roof Detail
You should redo your overhangs, it look likes cloth draping from parts of the same color. I suggest using wedges or union and negate.
Example of Overhang
The door looks like an entrance to a Saloon. You should change it a bit.
First floor windows are too high, you should lower it a bit.
As @SturdyStubs said, you should change your decal text to actual parts. It would give a more cartoon-ish vibe. As for logo or symbols, you can search for images in .png in google or make one either in studio or blender. But decals can be done for complicated logos if you’re not that proficient with blender like what I did in my build.
Example of Solid Text and Decal Logo
The Color Scheme you chose isn’t exactly that attractive. You should brighten it up more to give off a cartoon-ish vibe.
I don’t understand blender at all, and I attempted to use the plugin heres what I just did. I also did a bit of updating to it. @SturdyStubs@LOLShadowMoonLOL@GenPacaKent@z4ayn
Im going to update it a bit more. Thanks to you all for the help!
Hi there! I like the model you have produced, it looks pretty good so far. I also have a couple suggestions for your cafe/motel.
First off, your windows look pretty good, but the top windows are a different color than the bottom windows, to me this doesn’t look very appealing, Also you have a piece of the window sticking out from the bottom. Overall, they look pretty good though.
The logo’s don’t really fit the build, decals come out blurry some times, I would suggest using a text creator plugin or making words of your own. I do like the stick-out on the side of the building saying motel though, that’s a pretty good detail.
Other than that, you did a pretty good job on the build!