Game Feedback: How should I Improve?

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#1

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Hello! I’ve been working on my game currently called “Discarded”. The game is similar to eviction notice so I’m wondering how I can improve.

The start of the game Is finished. But the actual “Player Vs Player” part of the game is still in production.

The game icon and thumbnail are likely to change.

Here is the game link: Discarded - Roblox

#2

Visuals: 9/10

  • I genuinely liked the overall aesthetic of the maps, especially the first two rooms (before shock). Only reason I docked a point is because the detailing on the rooms could be improved, but thats just nitpicking.

Gameplay (7/10):

  • I’m not sure if Shock Therapy was supposed to be playable, but I wasn’t able to get past it at all. The parkour is pretty simple and the last rotating piece is a bit too slow for my taste. Personally, I’d make the first parkour a bit longer and use the soundtrack to emphasize pressure (which the clock ticks do well), while adding random shakes and explosions as the timer gets closer to 0.

  • Also, this is my opinion but I think the instructions should be on a UI or voiced over. The TVs are an awesome aesthetic but I think they should cosmetic on the side, with the UI being the main source of information.

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#3

I suggest adding badges, gamepasses, and maybe some dev products. The game has an icon, but not a thumbnail. I’ve never played these type of games. A tutorial would be nice.

Graphics are awesome though

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#4

Hey! thanks for the reply and feedback! I will defiantly use them. Shock treatment was also intentionally broken because I have not finished that section yet.

But thanks for the feedback!

#5

Hello. Thank you for the feedback I will redesign the icon and add a thumbnail once the game is finished.

Thanks for the feedback!

I will have to add a tutorial defiantly. and some badges

#6

when you die in the parkour part you just keep dying and you are stuck in this loop